Black Poetry : This Special Kind of Love

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  1. CsBabygirl

    CsBabygirl Member MEMBER

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    ((Please bare with me its my first time posting my poetry))

    This Special Kind of Love

    I asked Jesus for one day,
    to bring a special love my way.
    A special love that is so sweet,
    it completely knocks me off my feet.
    This kind of love I can call my own,
    and I'll never have to be alone.
    This kind of love will cuddle tight,
    finally someone to hold when it gets cold at night.
    When people get mean and times are tough,
    this kind of love cheers me up.
    This love tells me it will be ok and love is here to drive my pain away.
    Where in the world could this special love be?
    Across the world in another country?
    Or could it be found knocking at my front door,
    saying I'm the one his heart adores.
    I'm the only one that can fulfill his needs,
    and without you there is no me.
    A love that can hug me with all its might,
    and with a kiss can put me to sleep tonight.
    This special kind of love seems impossible to be.
    But I've realized different,
    I found a love for me.
    He gives me all I want and need.
    This love I have is special indeed!
    It fills my heart with ectasy,
    AND THATS THE SPECIAL KIND OF LOVE FOR ME.

    Dedicated to my boo Curt
    Give me your feedback be it good or bad.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome CsBabygirl to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    welcome to the new house u found and the poetic sound
    happy u join us in flow this was tyte and sweet to the love
    of ya heart beautiful write continue to flow & share love
    welcome to the family sista ! :welldone:
    :spinstar: :new: :hi: :congrats: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Baby Girl,

    We're glad to have such a gifted, loving poet join our family. As you make this your home, I'll look forward to more of This Special Kind of Love. :welldone:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An awfully sweet and genuine flow, sounds like a love most would want. Welcome to destee, hope you enjoy yourself here.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to detee.com
    enjoyed this scribe nice vibing
    look forward to reading more of you

    do join us in voice chat as well
    www.destee.com/chat

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Khasm13

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    welcome cs...
    good poem...you should drop more pieces on us...

    one love
    khasm
     
  7. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, you sure this is your first time??????
    'cause you are good!!! where have you been hiding?!
    i wanna read more of your work, don't let this be the last time!!!!!
    :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific:

    much love, plain.
     
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