Black Poetry : This Poem is About a Woman...~Story

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  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2/18/03
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    She's so decieving it's almost genious
    The situation is venal
    To the point of where drawing breath to speak
    Can be penal
    If that of which you wish to speak
    Contradicts her goas and her mission
    She is a fraud
    Needing to be stripped, exposed, destroyed, and burned
    To a pile of ash
    Dashed into an ocean of purity
    Held under until the memory of her too
    Is crushed into particles so small they're un-recognizable

    Her name is, Society-Normal-Expectation...

    ~Story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow
     
  3. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks, Rich
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Story..are you speaking of a "free" world where freedom is denied...or are you speaking of a woman who needs to be set free from herself....I can take it either way but I always like to see the real picture...or have I missed the mark altogether:)

    K
     
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    is that why i hate societal norms?

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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, kitana read my mind. are you speaking about a woman that needs to be freed from herself? this is quite interesting. nice drop.
     
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    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It sounds like you're talking about a woman that needs to be free, and society want let her be herself, but rather would brainwash or destroy her true self...tell me if I'm wrong or right. Also, I write poetry...My name is Poetic Pride and I'm new look me up and tell me what you think...My favorite is Sisterly Love.
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a "free" world where freedom is denied

    That's it....but i'm looking at it differently now!!! :)
     
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