Quiet Poetry Lounge : This one's dedicated to the one I love...my ExquisiteRay

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisitesOne, Jan 18, 2003.

  1. ExquisitesOne

    ExquisitesOne New Member MEMBER

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    Ray of Light

    Style and grace
    That cute little baby face
    Conversations that elate, and
    Physical workouts that internally satiate

    What to do with all of these new
    Avenues this friendship has lead me to?
    My mind is confused,
    My body is amused
    Will time and space
    Dull the aches created by all the paths your
    Hands like to make?

    So many questions, so few answers
    So much to say so little time, but
    It's amazing how understanding can come
    By putting words together that rhyme

    With a friendship this strong
    And not a hater in sight
    I'll continue to bask in my
    Ray of light.

    You are who you are,
    You floss how you floss,
    You shine like you shine,
    I gotta admit, I'm definitely glad
    That this friendship will always be mine.
     
  2. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    This poem's definitely exquisite
    entertaining to the mind
    with words so seblime
    they turn back the hands of time
    as you expound your rhyme.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis poem is love
    filled wit grace
    really set a smile on my face
    loved da vibe of ya scribe
    deep inside
    flow on make ya mark
    it's beautifully well written..
     
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