Black Poetry : This one is untitled can I get some help...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Defiantson, Aug 18, 2005.

  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Catch the vibe of
    The melodic vibrations
    Let it romance you
    Let it hypnotize
    Your erotic thoughts
    And as the vibration
    Tenderizes your imagination

    I want to come forth
    And give you all of me
    Yet I am at frenzy
    And a loss for words
    And as images of you
    Enter my mind
    A thought occurred
    And I wondered
    Can this really be true?

    The way she caressed my thoughts
    The way her spirit touched mine
    The feeling I receive
    When she is near me
    Send me into high
    That no other drug
    Can even compare too

    Hell, not even the heaven
    Can explain this feeling
    My mind is like a
    Solar eclipse when she
    Stands in front of me
    All I think of
    Is erotic thoughts

    Hell, I wanna taste her lips
    Letting them caress my thoughts
    With sensual feelings
    And as they tease my tongue
    My manhood starts to stand
    And wants nothing more then
    To experience her glory on top of me

    I want to taste her fruits
    And eat that peach
    Like it’s never been eatin before
    I want to tenderize it
    With licks of passion
    Seduce it with kisses
    That will leave her mind
    With only one thought

    And as she comes to that
    Point of climax
    I want her to
    Grab the back of my head
    And shove my face
    Into her womanhood

    So that I can taste
    All of the juices that
    Her peach is letting erupt
    Savoring every last drop
    Until it has been consumed
    Into my digestive track

    Just so that I can say
    That I have tasted
    The sweetest nectar
    That any man has ever
    Had the blessings
    Of just kissing those precious lips

    I want to get lost
    Within your womanhood
    With my thoughts
    So that I can
    Inject my throbbing pulse
    Into your glory and please it like
    There is no tomorrow

    I want to give you
    Injections of affections
    That will have you thinking
    That God himself
    Came down from the heavens
    Only to bless your womb personally

    I want to give your glory
    Every bit of
    My pulsing heart
    And with the rhythm
    Of my heart beat
    Give you all
    That will ever satisfy
    Your wildest dream

    And when it’s all done and over
    We can start over, and over, and over again
    Let me pleasing you mentally
    Touching you physically
    By placing my mind
    Inside of your thoughts
    And yet I wonder
    Can you handle all that?


    _________________

    It's been a while since I put some matterial on here but I was on a road trip doing my poetry. Places like Norflok, VA, New York, Washington D.C., Atlanta, and I can't forget about Brewtown Milwaukee, WI. They do it big there.

    For info on me or other poets of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com

    Mannie
    Host and Poet of the Verbal High.
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very hot and sweet .......sound like a title as such (SENSUAL FLAVA)
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmm... I got to think about that one, but first I got to see what others say. Thanks
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's sweet and sensual alright. This piece takes you into the mind of passion. A title for this...gee... None I can think of can do this piece justice brotha.
     
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    wowzers :eek: let me go out on a limb and say

    gee you must want her somefin bad huh brah lol j/k

    its nice very passionate... how about "BEYOND WORDS" or "HEAVENLY INSPIRATION"
     
  6. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like that "heavenly inspiration" but I still wanna see what else comes up thanks
     
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    that one has a nice ring that do fit well our dear sista Trin gave .
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right, thats what I thought too. Still open for more suggestions.
     
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    "at a loss words...not really"

    I just took a line from your heated piece...
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wow i just looked down the line and saw that jiah has the title i just gave you...altho i add not really to it...
    so...i dont know if thats what you should call it...even tho i think thats what you should title it...
    oh well
     
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