Black Poetry : ))This Obscurity((

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There’s something obscure,
    maybe even ominous.
    I’m not able to understand it fully.
    Its like I’m being un-orthodox and finally
    becoming prodigal to the normal accepted way
    of things.
    For the first time in a minute, I’m
    feeling the affects of something profound.
    I woke up right here, right now and realized that
    maybe there is something much more within
    me than the pragmatic things I usually deal with.
    I glanced at you and immediately I feel my interest in you rise.
    See,
    *pause*
    I have this desire to bath in your profusion,
    I know you might not be able to understand it;
    and it ain’t plausible even to me, but I’m
    perceptive enough to realize that this feeling I have is a
    direct result of you and bears more exploration.
    I’m the boy from Ipanema
    desiring to get to know the provocative stank you emit.
    Even now, I can’t...no I don’t want to rectify this;
    You stepped in here and relegated every sane and right thing in
    my existence and I love it.
    I don’t want to rescind anything you gave and I hope that
    you realize that what lies behind the intensity of my eyes when I gaze at you;
    is nothing short of fever for the opportunity to saturate myself in
    your reverential philosophy;
    your rhythm and rhyme.

    copyright
    2005
    PropheticNsyght
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That which can't be touched, yet it touches you beyond compare. Loved the depth of this piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomely pose'd the way u display the art is untouched
     
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    Hmmmmm watz its so good to hear from you sweets. I'm so glad this got to you like it got to me. Thank you for your continuous support.
    All my love and prayers mami.

    Prophetic
     
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    Brotha Rich,
    Your words never cease to encourage and uplift me to expand on my creativity. I love you something fierce my man.
    Peace and soul
    Love out...
    PropheticNsyght
     
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    Say whaaaaaa...............
    I'm chillin inside the lines of this scribe...
    and then I reach these lines...and suddenly
    I'm catipulted to a place that left me wanting
    more and more of that thing...that made you
    feel compelled to pick up a pen...and share
    it with the world..."Whoa"...

    This was some Powerful Elixir for the Soul...

    Poet...I love your work!...I do!

    mmm...You can do this again anytime you like..."Encore"
     
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