Black Poetry : This must be love....(2nd poem y'all, please dont hesitate to elaborate on it)

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  1. baglady

    baglady Member MEMBER

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    Define Love
    Love is defined as a feeling of warm personal attachment or deep ffection(if u wanna check i used Random House Websters College Dictionary copyright in 1999)
    But if love is defined as that, then what is this feeling of warm Personal attachment or deep affection
    I have towards you?
    I say it is Love
    But others say it is infatuation
    But infatuation is a foolish or irrational love or desire.
    But see boy
    By looking at this
    I know this is love
    Because this affection
    Is not an implantation
    Of your systematic identification
    Because you and I have syncopation
    That will last for generations
    And can never be taken away from
    You or me
    Cause we're ment to be
    No matter what they see
    In the behavior of you or me
    How can they tell us how were supposed to be?
    They hesitate
    Because they know this love will elaborate
    Now I dont mean to be insurtable,like common and mary j.,
    I just want you to know
    That your...
    Whole being is beautiful
    My love 4 you is plentyful.....

    My Love for you is forever real
    And when u smile at me ur cute as hell
    So to me boy
    This must be love
    Cause that is what im thinkin' of.



    this poem used to be about my x who is now my best friend....still love him to death....and would give him the world if i could...
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Baglady, :wave:

    Good see you're back!! :D

    I like this. Very nicely expressed!

    It's good that you and you're friends with your ex. Maybe one day you'll be able to give him the world!


    Looking forward to reading more from you!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    baglady Member MEMBER

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    o-ya...sorry for my absence.....i have been working alot...my brother and i are starting a teen club so i have been working on that and i have dance so...ya...sorry for the delays...they will be going on for a while till we get this thing up and running...but thanks for the comment sierra....and i will try someday to give him the world.....i try and think of ways i can everyday im on this earth..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true so real
    u define it well
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A sweet peace of poetry.
    I enjoyed the read... Thanks

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    :wave:NICE TO READ YA!:wave:

    This was nice baglady. What was your first piece called? I think I might have read it a while back, cause your name sticks in my head. Must of made a good impression.:)
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it
    Like it a lot.
    very sweet
    Just like u
     
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    HI mijita I'm glad u back :) scribe on :)
     
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