Black Poetry : This must be love....(2nd poem y'all, please dont hesitate to elaborate on it)

[baglady]

Define Love
Love is defined as a feeling of warm personal attachment or deep ffection(if u wanna check i used Random House Websters College Dictionary copyright in 1999)
But if love is defined as that, then what is this feeling of warm Personal attachment or deep affection
I have towards you?
I say it is Love
But others say it is infatuation
But infatuation is a foolish or irrational love or desire.
But see boy
By looking at this
I know this is love
Because this affection
Is not an implantation
Of your systematic identification
Because you and I have syncopation
That will last for generations
And can never be taken away from
You or me
Cause we're ment to be
No matter what they see
In the behavior of you or me
How can they tell us how were supposed to be?
They hesitate
Because they know this love will elaborate
Now I dont mean to be insurtable,like common and mary j.,
I just want you to know
That your...
Whole being is beautiful
My love 4 you is plentyful.....

My Love for you is forever real
And when u smile at me ur cute as hell
So to me boy
This must be love
Cause that is what im thinkin' of.



this poem used to be about my x who is now my best friend....still love him to death....and would give him the world if i could...

 

[Sierra]

Hey Baglady,

Good see you're back!!

I like this. Very nicely expressed!

It's good that you and you're friends with your ex. Maybe one day you'll be able to give him the world!


Looking forward to reading more from you!

~Sierra~

 

[baglady]

o-ya...sorry for my absence.....i have been working alot...my brother and i are starting a teen club so i have been working on that and i have dance so...ya...sorry for the delays...they will be going on for a while till we get this thing up and running...but thanks for the comment sierra....and i will try someday to give him the world.....i try and think of ways i can everyday im on this earth..

 

[$$RICH$$]

so true so real
u define it well

 

[cocobutterskyn]

A sweet peace of poetry.
I enjoyed the read... Thanks

feelin'it souldeep!
Coco