Black Poetry : **))This Morning((**

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'This Morning'
    Birthed: 05/22/3 (Through Contemplation)
    Scribe: Kashmyere 'Vuduu Chylde' (G.S.B-Gentleman Sings the Blues)




    This morning
    my soul cried aloud.
    This morning
    my soul begged for balance and
    peace.
    This morning
    my soul stared into
    my lifeless eyes and asked for life.

    ...breath into me,
    .....breath into me,
    ........please breath into me...


    Quietly,
    like the sound of dew on grass;
    This morning
    my soul reached for life.


    This morning
    my mind begged to be free.
    This morning
    my mind dreamed of piercing new
    levels of knowledge.
    This morning
    my mind wept over ignorance.
    This morning
    my mind peered through the rain
    and saw a better tomorrow.

    This morning
    my heart shed tears for the
    lack of reciprocated love.
    This morning
    my heart spoke of an empty place.
    This morning
    my heart sang a lament with
    the voice of a dusky contralto.
    This morning
    my heart took many breaths in an
    attempt to find some stability.
    This morning
    my soul, heart, and mind sought a form of completion...
    a form of peace and balance.
    Love and the absence of ignorance.
    Heightened senses of creativity and opportunity
    instead of passivity.
    This morning
    soul, mind, and heart
    recognized their flaws
    and became beautifully human.


    'Gentleman Sings the Blues' Inc. 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was outstanding love how it flowed out
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful detail in this. Excepting all that you are, and saying you're beautiful in total, for the bitter and the sweet make up who we are. I loved this piece.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your love always empowers me papi. thank you!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah you understand completely mami what this means! I appreciate and love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Prophesy that mornin' dew! :welldone:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1P thank you sir for your love and support...you are truly a gem among many gems! Thank you and much love.
     
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    good to see you back poet....
    i see you are still dropin da fiyah....
    please...keep flowin

    one love
    khasm
     
  9. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm...you are truly beautiful, hands down! Thank you for your sincerity and encouragement. Its good to be back and i'm very proud, yet humbled to know that you can still recognize the fiyah I strive to bring.
    You are loved.
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shades of Marvin Gaye...

    Deeply felt self reflective and beautifully prosed PEACE....

    Much
    Peace & Love
    Akilah :spinstar: