Black Poetry : this morning we were rushing

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this morning we were rushing
    overslept as usual
    i said to myself…it’s been a long time
    it’s been a long time since we’ve made love

    this morning we were rushing
    i smoothed baby oil on my legs
    wearing just my panties
    i saw you looking out the corner of your eye

    this morning we were rushing
    but i smiled to myself
    cause it’s been a long time
    but this fast is about to end

    it always makes me happy
    when you want me…
     
  2. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its funny how the hustle and the bustle of the day seems to somehow-just for a moment-in that moment of perfect bliss-stand still-until again to painfully come back to the real world and as you say....start rushing around...
     
  3. alyce

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    I love the visuals

    and the sentiments here. Very exciting to know that the fast is over. Nothing like it when he wants you. Again.

    Thank you for letting me take a peek.

    alyce
     
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    red.


    ...i gotta agree wit sista alyce & tell you that
    the imagery created with this peace is wonderful!

    the line "this fast is about to end" is stayin' in
    my head for some reason... ummm... i'll examine
    that lata! :lol: but!! ...thank you for sharing.
    your work is always soooo real to me!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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