Black Poetry : This moment in the country

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, come here....I need you
    Come help me strip green beans, and soak sweet peas,
    beneath the sky blue........

    You with your straw hat
    Me, with wild curls
    and my open back shoes.......

    Soft cotten clouds and the Sunshine smiles......
    against the pacific, so true

    Will you be my lover, mista' milk man?
    so we can play like children do.....?

    The buttercups greet us in the fields,
    as you tag me
    then I tag you,

    We fall in a pasture, of green mint leaves,
    and make nice, like bunnies do......

    You unbutton my blouse,
    then remove your hat,
    Cuz you were always a gentlemen, so true....

    You lay your head upon my breast
    so you can feel my heart beat comin thru....
    You ease my butterflies with just one kiss,
    and the world behind me melted too.....

    Like warm butter,
    on hot cornbread,
    "I Can't Believe" we had no clue.....
    What a day like this, in the country could bring,
    to a gal like me, young thang like you....

    As we explode in exstacy
    and the songbirds know, when to sing on cue.....
    and mama Nature, she holds the key,
    To this Parliment, a Heavens view.

    We become Kings and Queens of the passion land,
    as out bodies gel to create the perfect hue,
    of deep magentas and bright Cyans,
    Picasso's undiscovered dream comes true.

    I wont forget, this moment in the country,
    when I held your SoUL, you held mine too.
    And then the canvas came to Life!...Quick! Whatarewe to do??
    As you profess your love for me, and I in turn
    Proclaim Mine Too......

    This Moment in the Country......


    :heart:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm lil sis can you tell me what recipe you got that from sent me one email. that was hot.:hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very yummy tyte drop.....
     
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    THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL YOU TOOK ME THERE I GOT LOST IN YOUR WORDS TYTE DROP FLO ON SISTAH FLO ON

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    What a sweet moment in the country.
    Much Luv sweet apple*pie
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone for the luv !
     
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    most welcome indeed .....
     
  8. Love Always,

    Love Always, Guest

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    You are my sister, and I love you....
    I remember when you started this poem.....outstanding!
     
  9. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I think back on this flo...it really allows me to believe that tru love really can exist...you just have to let it find you...
     
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    Such crisp, earthy images here, I could almost picture that sweet moment in the country. Thanks for bringing this back to the forefront poet of the week.
     
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