Black Poetry : This Maze

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Aug 10, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dangerous maze
    always conflicting
    turning my insides out
    always empty
    never satisfing enough
    to fill me up
    now in circles
    now the colour purple
    dead ends
    illusions
    drifting to conclusions
    delusions
    running frantically
    unable to be communicating...
    rough , tough, i think i've been here before
    this looks familiar
    how did i get here
    how did i wind up
    going backwards instead of forwards
    I thought that i had
    got through this
    sure enough
    and somehow end up
    in this maze

    Desert Storm
     
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    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    Scairy, passionate. Kudos.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    I like your choice of words
     
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