Black Poetry : ~!This Man...!~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'This Man...'
    Birthed: 04/30/05 (Can't really explain where this one came from)
    Scribe: 'Gentleman Sings the Blues' aka Beautifully Human






    Yo ...
    I'm not sure how this came about.
    In a way this most likely
    wasn't supposed to happen, but...
    what can you say?
    For the first time
    in my years of existence
    I've been formally
    introduced to this kat named
    L.O.V.E (Love)...

    This jigga captivates me
    and I begin to realistically live and give
    way to daily respiration truly.

    If you're lookin for me..
    If you're wondering what
    happened to the vacancy of
    heart...
    I suppose you should be the first to
    know that after today
    someone else has taken up residency...
    I'm commited to a man, simply beyond this world...
    a man that leaves me complete and
    sane;
    competently secure and full of over-standing;
    bubbling with sensitivity and with the
    profound knowledge of life, liberty and leisure...
    a man that stimulates my mental and
    struck the strings to my soul.
    Here, the present, finds me commited to
    a kat known simply as
    L.O.V.E (love)

    'Gentleman Sings the Blues' 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this a note i know so well and the deep affects felt from it...............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know something poet, if one is commited to love in all things, love of God, love of self, love of children, love of mate, life...would truly be beautiful. Thank you for these words.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful piece poet, and it's very good reading you again
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    People do some weird stuff all in the powerful name of love.
    Thanx for sharing.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich its good to hear from you papa. Thank you!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen thank you for making me feel...quite good! LOL
    Its good to be read!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all good just don't stay away so long but
    it's wonderful to be reading yo art and mind
    on the page do flow when u can most welcome !
     
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    L.O.V.E. and you are a match made in Heaven!
     
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    re: Man

    Enjoyed this poem. Very nice.