Black Poetry : This Man Of Mine!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's so good like a good shoes sale
    I can't keep it to myself I just have
    to tell.
    Love as deep as the wishing well
    And even though we been through
    hell...This man of mine is like a
    blessing and so today I am confessing!

    You came back not knowing how you
    would be received, but through God
    and prayer and your loving ways you
    helped me to believe.

    Tenderness, like I have never known
    And oh how blessed and spirit filled
    you have indeed grown.
    And even though sometimes I doubt
    I know that we will work it out.
    The day we greet with words of Love
    and pray to our heavenly father above
    to bless our lives and bless this love.

    This man of mine, who takes the time
    to listen when I speak...even when I
    rant and rave , he patiently listens and
    criticisms he saves.

    When we are together I like a child with
    it's mother find comfort even in the nearness
    of you. If you are sleeping and I am working
    I turn and gaze for moments at a time and
    Thank God for this man of mine.
    Though right now miles seperate us.
    In our hearts there is only us!

    Your warm spirit and your free flowing laughter
    your comforting ways and deep intellect was
    all ways what I was after...This man of mine
    I think is worthy of all my time!
    Always on my mind!
    This man of mine, fine as perfectly aged wine,
    peaceful , funloving, forgiving and kind...
    This is what I love about
    This
    Man
    Of
    MINE!
    BJS(C)2002:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da one ya wit.........................that man of your seem to
    be a big score and a hold lot more love da one ya wit !
     
  3. smilin_dwarf

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    If only we could all find someone to love us as you love your man. Thank you for sharing.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb.


    get outta my head!! ...i think you just wrote my soul
    with this heah peace!! i was diggin it... relatin' to it...
    wavin' my hand & errythang!! :D

    thank you for sharing...

    itsallLOVE, chile!!

    elayne.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading and relating!

    As always, I humbly thank you for taking the time to read.
    Rich, it's been a long time coming, "But I knew that my Prince
    would come along...who knew?"
    Smilin_dwarf you are new to me, but I see you been peepin my flow, I look forward to doing the same!
    Sunshyne...Girl I thought the same when I read your's!!!!!!:D
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You scribe your love so beautifully.

    Thank you

    Saleem
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought I'd responded to this but I guess not....this is a very enjoyable piece!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A simply sweet peace.
    Thanks for tell'n it. :)

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just like they say

    If you love something
    let it go
    if it comes back
    it was always meant to be
    How nice that you foun your love :)
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my sista's for sharing my joy!

    Love is like the Christmas present it's on your wish list every year and some how , year after year you keep waiting and it doesn't come and then one day , one wonderful day...it just ups and opens wide with all of the wonderful surprise of that much wanted Christmas gift and your hopes are renewed. It has calmed my sometimes troubled spirit, invigorated my sometimes weary soul as a mother with all of the struggles that we share here, I am sure you know,from my poems I seldom write fantasy, I stick to what is real and relateable to us...and this was one I truly wanted to share...Thank you for weeping with me when I weeped, correcting me when I was wrong, and holding me up when I didn't feel I could stand another heartbreak...Now through my waiting on the Lord, who provides every good thing, I found love anew from a thirty year relationship that I never guessed would end up as a modern day love story...and it's so real "It even startles me sometimes!" It's still out there ladies, just remain faithful to the "First Love" ...and seek him first and every thing else will be added unto you.
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSES!
    PEACE AND LOVE!
     
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