Black Poetry : This L.O.V.E got this untitled

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  1. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've prayed for you
    searched for you
    in many of nights dreams
    and daytime fantasies
    now found, it seems
    often I extend my hand to touch
    to see if my fantasy
    is true reality

    The reality that appeared
    is one of true bliss
    The ecstasy continued
    when first we kissed.
    Our eyes were closed shut
    Our hearts were opened wide
    Never before has a love like this
    been felt so deeply inside...

    You've taken a straight path
    A whimsical stroll so deep into my heart
    "How did you know the way?"
    Setting apart
    Others who have tried
    attempted,
    pre-empted,
    what they contrived to
    "get to know me"
    But you...didnt try
    just did
    right from the start
    made a place
    a space
    to call your own
    deep inside...
    my heart.

    Agentshaft007 (c) 2001:love:
     
  2. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GIRL THIS WAS NICE FOR REAL YO

    I JUST HAD TO WRITE THIS PIECE

    Love starting after you met this thug in the garden we hugged before departing reaction to changes the satisfaction rearranges our feeling result was dramatic couldn't duck this fanatic event bought good moods we should be soul food so suspicious how delicious your lips are it was like I swallowed a pill I followed you up a hill because the tablet made me have flaws like a rabbit stealing acid from a medicine cabinet, what happen next we were rapping about sex under a chestnut tree got a bless round butt kisses came in sprees we couldn't oppose our vibes so we close our eyes and let it take place taste cake while I held your waist we looked into each others face as lovers I unloose your lace

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now

    ya just walked me down lovers lane
    into the garden of beauty.....well written :heart:
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agent,

    Lovely poem. Enjoyed the read.

    Madd Holiday Greetings. :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back on top such a sweet release
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite an endearing piece, so beautiful when this happens.
     
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