Black Poetry : This isn't my GODS World!

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This isn’t my Gods world.
    If it was there would no operations changing a boy to a girl.

    This isn’t my Gods world.
    There would be no abortion killing a life before it breaths a breath.

    This isn’t my Gods world.
    If it was homelessness would be solved and everyone would have a meal.

    This isn’t my Gods world.
    If it was there would be no war taking the life of those who are weak.

    This isn’t my Gods world.
    If it was then the small would be heard speak.

    No more tears.
    No more years.
    No more taking for granted
    the life we have here.

    That is the world my God made for me.
    Why won’t you let me live it?
    Why won’t you let me be?

    Flow poet. Flow on…
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    each moment passed the breath gets fainter
    somehow the air inside is dense and filled with smog like air,
    clustering
    dense...
    wheezing sounds escape
    the earth bottled up in mire and manure
    trying to drown the energy within
    still I breathe
    breathe the great devine within
    I know that i must find away to clear
    passages...
    allowing the spirit to run free in me
    for god is there...
    i know when i do all i should
    give what i have
    act instead of talk
    the one some call GØD
    OMNIPOTENT
    DEVINE CREATOR
    WILL HAVE A PLACE
    CLEAN IN ME
    SO LINKED TO BROTHERS SISTERS FAMILY
    MY BREATHE WILL BE LONG STRONG WINDS
    ALLOWING THE GREAT ONE IN
    til then
    I've got to clean me out
    not put the cause on anything else
    except
    myself..
    cause if I don't do
    and you don't do
    how can God ?
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great flow Deepy

    If you pile it all on your self, it’s contaminating worth. Evil deeds men do is wrong. This world was not created or made for them to steal the morning bird’s song.
     
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    It's not that I expect
    perfection
    God certainly didn't promise to
    elect a Democrat with each election
    But I do expect the votes to be
    counted correctly
    Not to be involved in a war
    conceived in insanity
    Where the difference between the
    haves and the have nots expand infinitely
    Makes one think we should join hands
    but too many shun the concept of unity
    If this were my God's world
    wouldn't some of this make sense to me?
    Perhaps some aspects of life will
    forever remain a mystery
    And within my own mind at least
    my freedom will remain, free
    This isn't my God's world....
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybee not, but it is hard to imagine a world without conflict.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great post here i really was into it and relate
     
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    This is God's world, but Satan is it's ruler (4 now).

    All we can do is remember who is running things momentarily & not be lead astray like lost sheep.

    Very nice piece.
     
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    true indeed! very mind sparking thoughts here from all.....it's a beautiful thing....

    positve over negative
    to accomplish our goals faster
    I love building with u brothers and sisters
    for I Self Lord Am Master
    God is the all inside us all
    can't be explained by a reverend, Imam or Pastor
    cause their job is to summarize
    so the scriptures get filtered
    you wanna know who God is
    Genesis 30:11 the 7th Sun of Jacob and Zilpha
    see we were taught purposely to call out the wrong name
    when we were kidnapped in 1555 and brought here on a ship named jesus
    & we would fall to our knees for Jesus to return to take us back home
    So even the name Jesus in the scriptures is meant to tease us........

    Peace & love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    FEELING YOUR WORDS POET

    ACTUALLY I FEEL THE SAME WAY
    BUT I UNDERSTAND
    THE SELF-PRESERVATION CAN GET UGLY AT TIMES
    ESPECIALLY WHEN ONE IS COLD, HUNGRY AND TIRED

    THE POET SHOULD GIVE PEOPLE SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT

    PEACE

    DSS
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet from the look of these replies...
    you inspired everyone including me...
    I don't have a flow, per say...
    but I am blown away by this scribe
    it's poems such as this...
    that make you get down and :bowdown:

    Phenonmenal....
    Sage
     
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