Black Poetry : This is what I feel...

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I saw a boy got killed
    can I ask the guy did it give him a thrill
    To see the sadness upon the mother face
    was so depressing and a disgrace
    This black on black crime must cease
    this epidemic of hate is like a disease
    that wont end but will continue to press on
    I ask why cant we remain strong
    Why must the devil always have the upperhand
    What is it going to take God son to arrive to take command
    The real war is not in Iraq
    It's on our on soil and that's a fact
    Babies are dying leaving their mothers to crying
    You see so many left out in the cold, hungry dying
    When someone ask can you spare some change
    Do you give or look with disgust now tell me is this humane
    We all Gods' children whether we agree or not
    We been lead astray from God's will and just plain forgot
    How Jesus laid his life so that we can recieve salvation
    Remember God didn't intend for us to be in damnation
    Have you told a stranger Good Morning or Good Day
    Have you been on your knees to pray
    Pray you ask for what I'll tell you
    Pray for the babies who's on life support
    Pray for your kids when they play a dangerous sport
    Pray for your enemies hoping that harm wont come their way
    Pray to just see the next day
    Pray for all whos in dispair
    Pray just because you care
    I have faults and I do sin
    But it is my heavenly Father I depend (on)
    So heavenly Father I ask that you bless ones who
    I do know, don't know. and whom I'm about to know
    Because he said to Love thy neighbor as you do yourself because
    the bible said so

    I ask this in son name Jesus Christ Amen!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well stated and felt of realism and the beat of life Black on Black
    prayer will help and heal ........................great post & message
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comment my windy city
     
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    This is real.
    I felt it and hope
    many take the time to
    think.
    Nice drop.
     
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    thanks for the nice comment i hope ones will take the time to think before they react
     
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