Black Poetry : This is off top

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nadea, Oct 31, 2003.

  1. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Nobody really knows me

    I said NOBODY REALLY KNOWS ME

    Vicious rumors started by jealous girl not yet stopped
    Vicious rumors kept going by immature, unhappy water sign.
    not yet stopped.
    I don't have enough tears to drown them.
    I use to cry all the time,
    But I've stopped crying now.
    I refuse to be lead by my tears
    I'm going to pick up and start all over again
    I'm going to pack my things...
    no, as a matter of fact, you can have them.
    I'm going to pick up and start ALL over again

    Childish tendancies still reside in adult lives
    25 year old adult still works, lives and plays
    in his childish tendancies.
    I felt his rumored words the last time he
    wrapped his arms around me.
    I felt him take his nails and scratch the words
    into my back as he smiled and asked me
    How I was doing.
    As I smiled and responded, thinking
    that I wish he knew me.
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feelin this - "immature, unhappy water sign"...always nice to hear from someone who pays attention to the star influences. Also feelin the part about the 25-year-old actin like a child. At least twice a week I wonder aloud why some people act the child as an adult and some children act like adults. Keep em comin.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Vicious rumors started by jealous girl not yet stopped"
    and this
    "Childish tendancies still reside in adult lives
    25 year old adult still works, lives and plays
    in his childish tendancies."

    feelin this...i like the flow
    seems they seek attention just to hear them speak
    not knowin what it do to the one
    they speak on
     
  4. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks gempis.

    mzblkangel, EXACTLY. Thank you as well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this speaketh turth of our reality today