Black Relationships : This is not a love poem

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  1. Poetess

    Poetess Member MEMBER

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    This is not a love poem

    The shift of morning into day
    With the burst of the morning sun
    I envision your face. It is your presence
    the smell of you in my clothes/on my skin
    giving me the desire to see you again

    But then I hear your voice and my pulse grows strong
    I know a feeling like this can never be wrong
    I pour out my words in my poems for you to read
    Because in my life, maybe you are to be
    But THIS IS NOT A LOVE POEM.

    When you’re not around that is your essence
    You are breath taking in mere words
    You’re some one special and most preferred
    I can’t resist you, because you’re so appealing
    But THIS IS NOT A LOVE POEM.
    But a attempt to let you know I’m willing
    :love:
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    That last line was CHECKMATE! lol


    Okay. If you say so, it's "not a love poem." But, I did think I saw a fishing line fly over my head just now. :em0100:
     
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