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THA HOOKUPMAN

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:new: :nono: This is not a love poem :nono:

nope yawl it aint!

cause love don't live here anymore
see I've closed the doors on confusion and frustration
cause the lack of concentration had me contemplating
these irrational thoughts of homicide
cause her ***
cheated and lied

I cried enough tears to fill the Atlantic Ocean
it was her lack of devotion
that soon gave me the notion
that this relationship was lost at sea

and I could not see the reality of the situation
cause I thought we had a foundation built on love and trust ...right!!!

so honesty became my worst enemy
And I remember when we first made encounters

we conversed and I became immensely immersed
by the way your loins of venus aligned perfectly with my spaceship pluto
and it seemed as though nothing could come between us
or contain us until you gave me your anus to kiss

this twist of fate left me fatally wounded in my coronary artery
and the part of me that allowed me to procreate love from inside died
And from that day forward I bent over backwards
and fell to my knees in order to please
you and falsate your deflating ego

Just so you could go and tell a friend
and spend hours on end
premeditating metaphors in your head,
so you could put words in my mouth,
so that I only spoke your language
And it's strange that this love thing can feel so good yet hurt so bad,

but I had to put love out my house cause I caught love stealing my emotions
and dealing my feelings in the street and pimping my pride like some two dollar ***
And I couldn't take it nomore
so I kicked love to the curb,
hung a do not disturb sign on my heart and padlocked the door

So this is not a love poem cause love don't live here anymore
and though my heart saw right through your lies with x-ray vision
I made the conscious decision to forsake my religion for the sake of your happiness
And after this you treated me like I didn't exist
like my body had just committed a crime
and you sentenced my body to loving you for life without the possibility of parole

I lost control
and my mind and soul became wide open to you like 7-11
Twenty- four hours a day, seven days a week
And in that weakened state of mind
you diluted my delusions with your ***** solutions
and random acts of kindness
It was my blindness to the situation
that allowed your manipulation and dictation to be less apparent
So I stood transparent at the fork in the road
looking for the right path to love
so I chose the road not taken,
mistaken your lust for love but instead of truths I found deception
And my perceptions became congested
as I manifested into a figment of your imagination
dramatized by your well-written scenario

So this is not a love poem cause love don't live here anymore
and I don't know where love is right now
or when love's coming back for the rest of it's confusion and distress
Cause when love left here love left no forwarding address

this is not a love poem :nono:


wrote this when i was going thru divorce ...i know some body out there felt this at one time or is feeling this way now....
smile ..love is on the way again poets... brotha hookup
 
:crying: nope, smh...this definitely ain't no love poem
but it is a heart wrenching display of pain, disappointment,anger
and brokeness of the heart...

there are so many imitations of love in this world...
consider it a blessing to have lost something that could never complete you
you are now open to experience love, be loved, give love and receive..."real" love at heights to which one can yet to begin to fathom...

One thing is certain though...once you've experienced the imitator...
meeting love and knowing that it is truly love is easy...and you'll know it
beyond the shadow of a doubt... :wink: …you’ll know it, you’ll know it... :sand:


This poem touched me...these words are too...my words
Sensational piece...@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Encore...
Sage
 

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