Black Poetry : This is my promise

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  1. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS MY PROMISE

    To simply say I love you
    does not seem adequate enough
    But I’ll show how much I love you
    when the going gets a little rough.
    I’ll be there when you need me
    through the sunshine and the rain
    I’ll show how much I love you
    over and over again
    I’ll show how much I love you
    by the little things I’ll do
    like a kiss good-bye in the morning
    or bending to tie your shoes.
    I’ll greet you with a smile
    after a long and busy day.
    I’ll massage your aching muscles
    to soothe your pain away.
    As I walk by your side
    through good times and the bad
    I’ll be there to remind you
    of all the fun we shared.
    I’ll follow you to the ends of the earth
    or wherever you choose to go.
    You are my king and I am your queen
    our God has deemed it so.
    If health issues become your worry
    I promise to stick around
    I’ll never leave nor forsake you
    until one of us is in the ground.
    I know that is a morbid thought
    although one day it shall come true
    That is why I believe it is not enough
    to say how much, as it is, to show how much
    I truly love you.
    :love:
     
  2. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Sister with a heart of Gold. God children no the true meaning
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwww this is a very beautiful poem...
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mz. agapeluv, your name is so appropriate and so expressed this beautiful flow.
     
  5. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is FULL of love...very nice write!
     
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