Quiet Poetry Lounge : THIS IS MY LAST POEM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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  2. Earthly Allure

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    I hope that this isn't your last poem. Your work is good and i'd hate to miss seeing you around here *smile*
     
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    YOUR creativity dying?Read that poem again you got mad skillz lovin it :toast:
     
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    str8 awesome flowing tyte indeed
     
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    Oh sister soldier this will never be your last poem, the humbleness around you is only transformation before God, there is much work to be done, he humbles the heart and the soul, sometimes it feels like a darken hole, with that darkness light shall form, believe sister I know been there many times.
    You are here for a mission, and the silence in your life is just test of faith, man shall never understand the calling of thy God. Nevertheless the devil will make you take your last breath. Oh thy choose warrior of thy lord. Your spirit have crossed to the other side, your assignment is being prepared by God. There is much work to be done, God made warriors to lead and believe me through your script the heart continues as the father speaks through you.


    Be not fool by darkness stay to the light, when the spirit transfer over beyond the earth it gives the body a shock there are great things which is being prepared upon this earth sister soldier, ask the heavenly father he will guide you all the way, and your wishes will be delivered, it is just openning to cross to a higher level of thought. The first step is humble, meditate, faith, the first steps to hear the father as he speak through your pen.
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Keita,
    I just can't make myself believe this, but I will say this I have enjoyed your spirit on this forum, and I just believe in my heart that you're not done yet....Maybe tired, warn or whatever, but just not DONE.
    Much love and blessings to you and your family. :grouphug:
    Nita
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  7. j'hiah

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    l feel every single line in this one, especially the third one.. l
    understand the poetic hiatus.
    lt just gets that way.

    tyte piece!!
    jh...
     
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    Nice Poem.
     
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    :eek: Your last poem? I dont know you but from what I have read here this might be one of your best poems I am in awe from your poetic expressions and clever word play. I am new here and I would hate to see you stop when you have so much passion in your words and this much talent.

    "If It's A Scorpio.... It has style!"
     
  10. GeneticSoul

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    :read: :deal: oh so much to inspire me so that letting all your heart show sista you have created something so precious and its a jewel i could not recreate.
    ~1
     
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