Quiet Poetry Lounge : This is my Def Poetry Jam.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Pharaoh Jahil, Aug 6, 2003.

  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dropping my inner thoughts
    on paper, I feel the sensation to write
    My spirit is so full of energy and passion
    My mind is feeled with mixed emotions
    As I hear voices in my head
    I let it all out on paper
    Rather it's about love, revolution, life or abstract
    It all becomes a clear and beautiful picture
    painted with a pen......
    Oooh, I feel powerful
    when I write....
    Give me a pen and I will drop creative thoughts
    Some might not understand
    But that's okay
    Sometimes spoken word can't be translated
    For it is a unique language of one's
    own imagination...
    A world of it's own
    going on inside the human mind
    That could either be influence or non-influence by reality
    Either way, it's your own imagination
    An expression of what you feel, how you view life
    It's like Art - Consciously Imaginabelly Creative
    The power in words are a moving force
    Deep vibes transfering from the mind unto matter
    The quiet voice from within trying to come out...
    Concealing your thoughts is like keeping the spirit
    locked away...
    Free your voice
    for it is a gift from the Creator.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes jam on !

    dis was very nice flowin
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes yes
    feeling you deep on this
    the creative force of the words
    color the minds with those
    painted words
    enjoying the pleasure of the wriiten arts
    brings out deep exciting passion
    from within the heart
    Lovely nice release
    loving your flow
    Peace
     
  4. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx people....Use your voice!
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I must say Jah
    This was very well spoken
    And also well felt...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you playwithitpimp. That compliment felt really good coming from a poet like you.
     
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    Hello Ra this is Good!......

    Def jam?do they send there poems there to?

    and welcome!

    much love liberty!
     
  8. SeXiAzzMahMi

    SeXiAzzMahMi Banned

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    Wow @ You Poet!

    I am really loving this so much....

    The power of words in your mind's eye is so wonderful...


    "Concealing your thoughts is like keeping the spirit
    locked away...
    Free your voice
    for it is a gift from the Creator..."

    And this is what my words are to me as well....

    My voice...

    Wow Thank u so much...
    :heart:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow Jah this was so sublime indeed...jam on my brotha :)
     
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    writing is a natural high.. writing is the best high...
     
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