Black Poetry : This Is Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jul 21, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she wants to be accepted by those who arent
    cuz they somewhat understand
    she wants to bring new meaning to success
    cuz no one has dont it yet
    she wants to create new beginnings
    cuz life has only witnessed a few
    she wants to be remembered in history
    cuz she wants to feel important
    she wants to understand love and life
    so she questions every single answer
    she wants to create theories
    cuz most of them do not make sense

    this is me yall...
    Oh, how i wish that you could live inside my heart
    this is me yall...
    oh, how i wish that you could read my mind...

    she tries so hard
    cuz failure scares her to death
    she enjoys being diferent
    cuz no one comprehends her logic
    she makes her own rules
    cuz she wants to build her own world
    she wants to be tested
    cuz strength lies in persistence
    she wants to live life to the fullest
    cuz a person can only live once
    she wants to touch heaven's gate
    cuz she wants to feel some type of righteousness

    this is me yall...
    oh how i wish that you could see thru my eyes
    this is me yall...
    oh, how i wish that you could feel what i feel

    she never says much
    cuz her thoughts carry her to silence
    she always smiles
    cuz something about life and people intrigue her
    she wants to travel to the past and excell to the future
    cuz she wants to know the difference
    she reads every line, every story, every tale
    cuz she wants to learn about the authors
    she separates herself from her surroundings
    cuz she wants to stand out...
    she wants to experiment everything
    cuz she wants to know... she just wants to be able to know...

    this is me yall...
    oh, how i wish that you could understand...
    that this is me yall...
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Um, me too. :)
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um ok lol...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now this flow had me like wow!!!
    u masted a great flow here
    let ya pen continue
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u $$Rich$$...
     
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    very nice poeticlyspeakin
    hearing you on this scribe
    loud and clear
    much love:heart:
    Peace
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u Bluewater
     
  8. Loveall20

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    Off the chain.
    Very Artistic.Loved this.
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is you....who we all love:D <im going for the cheesy replies today can't you tell?

    Tyte flow poet:)
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol... aight SwtT, thank u Loveall20...