Black Poetry : This is me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daya, Mar 16, 2003.

  1. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is me but u will see, see the enter beauty that lies with in me
    how do u controplate me do u think I'll be
    I'll be in ur eye's forever so please don't try and be cleaver.
    you think you know what love's all about
    yeah right
    what are you doing saying you love me.
    How do I get in this mess why do I put up with the stress
    one day I will see, see the path the lord chose for me
    I know this man will bring anther but still I play this game of find the good brother
    The same ruten
    happy then sad
    mad than glad
    you cheated
    you lied
    you sayed you would never say good bye
    you love me you hate me
    you really disscrass me
    you'r married
    you'r single
    you'r unsure what to be
    let me see could this be another man to get next to me
    or should I listen to my iner soul and just let this men go
    MY eye's they hert
    they seem to just bring durt,pain and so much hert
    One day i shall see thru these eye's GOD gave to me the one tru love put on earth for me
    that one and only tru love that one and only for love these eyes I have will set me free. let me see what you have for me


    Sincerely ur girl Daya


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    U are as strong as U wan't to be so be free in UR Destiny:toast: :confused: :confused: :confused: :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin ya motion ........just scream and let it out
    close ya eyes and when u open them all dis myth
    will be gone .......flow on !
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Daya, you are well represented by the noise you brangs...

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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    be patient...GOD will make him available to you.:)

    continue your flow
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Passion filled mos' def!!!

    Good read...welcome to the family!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading my poetry It means alot to have some one read it