Black Poetry : This is long so yall dont have to read it if u dont wanna...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Oct 2, 2003.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LoL thanks Olakuoto
    I dont have any children...shoo I dont even have a man to have any with LOL
    maybe later down the road I'll live this tale out...:)
    thank you:)
    :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so sweet and beautiful
    can u tell me a bed time story tonight
    Pleazeeeeeeeeee!!!!
    wow........love it
     
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    oh man i like this one alot, triniti,
    this is the BOMB!!!
     
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    Rich...arent YOU the poetic master...Lord knows I would rather listen and read you...:) but like i told Olakuoto...maybe one day in the future I'll live the tale out :) thank you my Richne$$

    the_story...thanks lil sis...for your so coveted seal of approval LoL :wink: :) :wave:
     
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    girl this was so tight and so sweet...really this was the bomb...and you know better than saying you don't have to read it if you don't want to...that makes me wanna read it even more!
    lol much love for this one.
     
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    yeah ! tale or not that was pure gifted power
    i want u to read me a bed time story while i suck my thumb
    lol..........i really love this piece it's so smooth and full of life
     
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    gooood lawwwwwd this is so tight and wonderful!

    *passes out*
     
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    <<with your daddys eyes that make mommy glow”
    “and your momma’s smile that makes daddy know-”
    “that you are a walking talking testimony
    of love so strong it continually
    blesses this family”>>

    i am speachless....
     
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    awwwwww this was so beautiful:)
     
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