Black Poetry : This is for VISUAL X

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  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (I posted this a couple years ago and his respose touched my heart to this day - VISUAL X - I miss you so much...where are you? :( )

    TRUST


    Can I trust you...
    completely
    with all of my heart?

    When I touch you
    so deeply
    although miles apart...

    Could I place my
    emotions
    inside of your hands?

    Would U erase my
    devotion
    with devious plans?

    How can I be
    certain
    that you will be true?

    Now and then I see
    curtains
    within you withdrew...

    In order to
    preserve
    Integrity whole...

    I must border
    reserve
    respectfully in my Soul...

    I want to dive
    deeper yet
    into your depths...

    But not contrived
    til we forget
    the sacred place kept...

    Promise me
    only this
    that you will be...

    Everything
    that this Empress
    has already seen...

    I'm A Queen...
    I Need A King...


    2000 S.Z.Divine
     
  2. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U can trust me wit dis heart
    even tho we be miles apart
    i'll savour u & emotions too
    make yo living dream come true

    inside my heart like a beat of 2
    holding on close to all self treasures
    within my handz dis be measured

    Caress yo emotion wit my ways
    seal it wit a lovin GOD praise

    forth u will knoweth by da depth of my throne
    feel da realem of my tone
    u will knoweth from my glow
    read my heart inside my flow
    taste da KINGDOM of my home
    where a lovin Queen free to roam
    yes dis care is of miles we bare
    yet da love is in tender lovin care

    promising all that one may wish
    dis comfort surely i bring as
    open vow of heart da song i'll sing
    let da true love ring
    forth i am da KING
    set to honor a lovin Queen ........

    I couldn't help myself dis was awesome!!!!!!
     
  4. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks klabarron!!!

    $$$RICH$$$ - that was GREAT I love it - thank you so much for the return poem :) :) :)

    1luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Twofish ya most welcome sistah Queen of Treasures
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely piece
     
  7. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many thanks shaz :)
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good good stuff
     
  9. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thunder - I am most appreciative :)

    1:heart:
     
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    Beautiful peace Twofish ... and I miss VISUAL X too

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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