Black Poetry : This is backwards

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  1. legit-writer

    legit-writer Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I sacrificed my friends to be with you, then why do you
    act like you don't want to be around me?

    If I did favors for you, then why do you treat me like
    trash?

    If I tried to understand the way he acts, then why can't
    you acknowledge it?

    If I confided you in you all these months, then why can't
    you can't trust me?

    If I am a human, then why did you call me a dog?

    If you made a mistake, why can't you confess to it?

    If I am supposed to be your dependent, then why is it vice
    versa?

    If we are supposed to be a team, then why are we are trying
    to beat each other to the finish line?

    If we have hurt by people, then why are we doing it to each
    other?

    If "we" are rational, then why do "we" do crazy things?

    Tell me that!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    funny how we twist thingz
    and not be str8.................
     
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    You are right, it is backward, funny how that work. and why it even happens
    Peace
     
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    Great flow :toast:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich,

    I feel you on this one!! A wonderful read, Rich!! :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Mmmmmmmmmmmmm........this one really makes u think and it is very funny how things get twisted around...........Good point made here and great expression.........
     
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