Quiet Poetry Lounge : This Is A Real Prayer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, May 8, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (this has nothing to do with my boyfriend)

    my body feels heavy
    my hands are shaky
    my eyes are hurting
    from the words i saw and felt pierce my soul
    Like bricks I feel the tears are ready to fall
    And build something ugly
    Or so sweet only if thee were touched by he
    My God please open them
    His eyes can't see that you are the only one
    My morning moon and sun
    Jesus my tears must run
    For it's not suppose to be this way
    He's so confused please show him which way to choose
    This is my prayer to you............

    can you all please pray for me,because it hurts
    I'll try to smile:wave:
     
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    he hears your call
    yeah those hurt words
    toss bricks
    flow the release
    you are indeed heard
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Blue, he hears you, sometimes it seems like he doesn't hear quickly enough, but he does. Felt the heaviness of heart in this, hoping the heaviness will be lifted soon.
     
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    Dear Young Poet,

    You paint with words so beautifully. I am always impressed with your level of maturity. Are you really only 16??? Thanks for the expression of a compassionate heart in prayer for a friend. Continue in the faith and let none deter you...for there be many in sheep's clothing.

    Joyce
     
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    very nice flow i like da sweetness of it
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My darling, I don't know what it is your going through but I do know that there is a God who loves you more than you know. He wants to be your all and all you have to do is call, trust and depend on him completely!!!!!! Know that if you don't ever know anything else, Know that God loves you more than others and more than you might love yourself! He sees you and He's there for you, just take the time to call and reach out to him. If you need me I'm here praying for you. Your friend and brotha in Christ,
    Dior
     
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    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    prayer

    For your happiness and those around you
    For your peace and for peace to those who love and care for you
    For joy to occupy your heart so that you may pass this to others
    For wisdom to light your way always and guide you in your darkest times
    With the help of HIS son Jesus
    I ask these things for you.
    :heart:
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    Blue thanx so much for the love and encouraging words
    Watz you are always there thank you so much for your love and support
    Joyce thank you for your compliment and words,yes I'm sure I'm only 16 :lol:
    Rich you know how I do:wink:
    Dior thank you so much for the encouragement and love brotha:wave:
    Cindy :love: I love you thank you so very much for the love and uplifting words
    Thank you everybody I'm good today last night I was just having some problems with my friend,but I think after I preached to him for a bout an hour he has the understanding:wave::grouphug:
     
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