Black Poetry : THIS is a LoVE pOeM

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS is a love poem
    one that will sing you to sleep
    hold you deep into R.E.M
    and make you Remember
    Every Minute of what
    whispers you dream of
    it'll make you cry pearls
    and sweat rubies
    make you rub the inside of
    your thighs so hard diamonds
    will fall at your feet
    THIS poem here will kiss
    you 'til you speak Portuguese
    and this love even Tina Marie
    can't sing of
    it wil taste your memories and
    cultivate your desires /
    harvest them and arrange
    them as the eighth day of the
    week / this is just a love poem
    that will break down Eros
    Agape Philia and Sex to you
    in your previous life / this poem is so
    bad you'll call each punctuation
    mark your lover
    (you never thought a PERIOD
    looked so good)
    This poem here is a tragedy
    it loves you so much it hurts
    to the death just to be born
    as your twin
    This poem built love in a day
    that had only four hours and
    two minutes made the sun hang
    so long that it forgot the other
    19 hours and 58 minutes...and the moon
    is still stuck in it's first quarter because the
    other 3/4ths is afraid to show that
    it's blushing
    this poem will breathe your name
    and exhale it backwards as you arch your
    back this poem is a bad
    maama jama / it will make your
    toes curl your lip quiver your
    skin bump and your body need
    the fingers behind this piece
    this poem is a transcendant offspring
    of a mind that holds no erotic boundaries
    the limitless is the limit / this is a love poem
    that is only meant for you

    (c)blakverb 2001 "just thinkin"
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakverb

    this scribe flow'd black velvet and as I laid my eyes upon each and ev'ry line....the smoove-ness of your verbiage served to remind.... me...

    how blessed among wo/men Poets be....

    I enjoyed 'hearing' this piece....I felt an air of incredible sensual/sexual confidence (very nice)....and my favorite phrase is :

    "the limitless is the limit"

    Hit a sista where she dwells....


    thank you

    a
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well... dayum!


    bravo... My RoYaL BLak-NeSs... bra-vo!!

    this is indeed a LoVe pOeM... & my fingers are
    itchin' like crazy to get back wit cha on this... :wink:
    but imma just let this one flow!... i loved it
    though... i'm sure you know dat.

    One.
    Ga~
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey ya'll i'm recycling. my mind is beat down....

    blak
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kewl....

    Good recycling job Blak...... :lol: I still love the poetry even if it is recycled!! :D


    N2
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    You are Crazy Talented dog! Anutha Brilliant Piece!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  7. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak...

    I would love to hear you READ this one!!! I mean, you got my mouth hanging open!!:lol:
    There's nuthin more to say cept, "Wow!!!"
     
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    recycle if you must!!...

    your scribes are always betta the 2nd, 3rd, 4th...
    (well you get the pic)... time around!! :D

    :heart:
    QueenGa~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb

    da flow of whispered love to
    lala every Queen asleep is
    on hit sing da tune brutha...:D
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can tell that you, too, read nikki giovanni

    this flow was so-o-o-o-o-o delicious
    i'm savoring it even now
    in the after glow...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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