Black Poetry : This Is A Love Poem

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  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watching a movie with me means more to me than any bought gift ever could.
    I want quality time not sexual time.
    I want my mind made love to.
    Stimulate me with your inner thoughts; tell me what you think and how you feel.

    Do I make you angry?
    I need to know
    Do I just piss you off?
    I need to know
    Do I hurt your feelings so bad that you want to walk away and never look back?
    I need to know

    This is a love poem, after all

    I love you enough to care.
    I love you enough to share how I feel.
    I love you enough to cry when it hurts and to laugh when it’s funny.
    I love you enough to want to communicate and make our love work.

    Darn it! This is a love poem, after all

    “Everything has to be your way” what does that mean?
    I do believe you are correct.
    I want some communication, some reformation, some understanding, some future planning, some proven action, some satisfaction.
    That is my way, your theory has been studied, proven and is now a fact. Congratulations.

    Don’t you get it?
    This is a love poem
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da depth ya creativity the mixture of love
    indeed this was a love poem awesome scribing
    peace & love unto u for blessing the page again.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice love poem
    thanks for sharing.....Angel
     
  4. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very well put! I did indeed love this well written poem. You got your point across.
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully put keep on with da knowledge

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. Andreattah

    Andreattah Active Member MEMBER

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    You said it like you read my thoughts..
    Thanx for that piece..awesome! :wink:
     
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