Quiet Poetry Lounge : this insanely sane world...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, May 4, 2005.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've lost my insanity, can't find it in lost property...
    i need an inspiration, something to follow me through,
    lighten my baggage and make sure i don't make the
    same mistake i made to get here.

    it's a strange world, this sane world, with people who only know
    small talk and nothing to do with themselves but jog.
    Poets and musicians don't exist in this place,
    the only outrageous thing done here is keeping a dog
    and grocery shopping on a saturday...

    I, find it hard to imagine i was ever in this world, the people
    here are, interestingly sane and normal. Once in a while
    as i dream of my insane place, i wonder why i left it
    behind.. could it be that i grew up? but adults live in
    insane bliss! could it be i'm passionately in love???
    but love isn't for sanity!

    maybe it's because i think of sanity in my sanity world,
    i think of how it could be if poets were journalists and
    artists; designers...

    can i open my eyes? am i insane again mom?

    :dance: :bellydance: :kick: :hammer:

    *join me in my world and write something!!!*
     
  2. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say it cause you know it must truth
    and the reason why is because it comes from within you :hi:
    :insane:right along with you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up wake up ya sane poet
    flow head write .....
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting take on life.

    I enjoyed it!
     
  5. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all my fellow insane poets!!! (said out of love)

    i'm doing the strangest of things lately and i don't know why!!!
    i feel like i've just been freed from something... weird...

    anyway that's why i chose to write this... :donttell: :donttell:

    :insane: :insane: <-------- thats me!!!
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :donttell: nobody but i'm titled a poet, (even though i just write) and i draw...so you see some poets are those things. i am not mom or anything of that nature but i will say this; you are not insane, open your eyes and you may see insane things, but never go insane. but even if you do, insanity is only people who are too smart for other people that don't see things as they do, does that make sense? well--oh well it's insane like that, so it doesn't have to...good point made poet...PeAcE
     
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    well said , well done i love this piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is completely sane for some would be insane for others, I think artists of all types view things a bit differently, and for us, that's sane.
     
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