Black Poetry : THIS I VOW.......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Devotion …
    In this moment…
    My love is devote to you..
    I stand by your side….
    Not to let go..
    But to hold you…
    Forever close..
    Devotion…
    Thy vow is here
    I will stand by my love..
    I devote my place in life
    Right here by your side….
    In this moment…
    My love shines right before
    Your eyes….its yours
    For keeps…
    Thy vow….
    Cherish what you mean to me….
    Oooooooh my DEVOTION
    Is to hold yoU close
    To love you forever more…
    Yes….
    This moment my heart speaks
    From its soul…cryin out
    Tears of joy..
    In
    In this moment…
    Can you hear what I vow….
    Devoted forever more…
    I vow….
    In this moment…..
    ForEVER more….:love:
     
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    Devotion

    I thoroughly enjoyed this!

    :toast:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought..i am so happy you enjoyed...much love..:grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In that moment
    of love a sweet
    devotion , divine
    through da eyez
    a sparkle shine
    a vow
    ahhhhh!!
    knowing ya mine
    together in love
    a treasure so
    unique
    lovin heart
    forever to keep
    devotional
    worthy love
    it was a gift
    from above

    Devotion
    a
    Queen
    of
    beauty
    to be
    beside
    the
    one
    king
    of ya heart
    a lover
    from da start
    give me dat
    devotion
    dat
    warm feelin
    to know da
    essence
    the desires
    of a soul
    devotion
    devotion
    devotion
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Special….
    In this moment my heart
    delivered upon you
    my love……
    I take you in honor as my king..
    And give to you as your Queen
    In this moment…
    Devotion
    Devote….
    So divine is you and I….
    into us.....
    So true to a pure treasure of love…
    I offer to you…
    Devotion….
    This thy vow what my love
    Is … thy essence of full bloom…
    I belong to you…
    in this moment….
    For EVER more…..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alway there at
    one side and
    love sweet &
    divine devotion
    is a spray of care
    this i truely ware
    my love is pure
    and mild da kind
    dat keep u in smiles
    devotional caresses
    tender motions
    da moment of waves
    we embrace from da
    bliss of devotional
    twist
    kiss da heart deep
    within
    da love of two as one
    devotion
    devotion
    devotion
    KING & QUEEN
    da song ring
    hear da souls sing
    da bell rock
    on devotion
    that's devoted
    coz i'm devotional
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    never in spare..
    right there…
    what a love…
    so emotional
    ohhh….
    Devotion
    Of thy
    Devoted…
    A love so pure..
    I am your Angel…
    Embrace of a twist…
    Vibes so deep
    makes me week…..
    thy love is an honor…
    your what dreams are made of…
    my heart follows in deep
    as I come and sweep you
    of your feet…
    My King and I
    fly above hold hands of love…
    locked in a version of our on bliss…
    so devoted…
    in dis devotional bliss
    springing up high and
    yo arms is where I lay……
    DEVOTION
    In this moment...
    For EVER more...
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was :hot:!!!!!! I loved it...... Well, I love all ur work.......:D
    Keep the flos tyte and coming full blast........
     
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    very very nice...much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    vowing to be
    can it be
    is da love meek
    from da devotion
    a motion maze
    inside a love da
    blaze
    never fade
    always there
    in up & downz
    devotion
    bring da smiles
    felt fo miles
    all i want to do
    is give devoted
    devotion...........