Black Poetry : this guy from the club...(come with me)

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ABOUT 1:45 AM
    so i been watchin you for awhile and i liked what i saw
    so let me apologize in advance but i gotta come raw
    i'm not after your mind even though you seem to have a lot to say
    i'm after one thing only but in every thinkable way
    i like the way you move your hips when you're on the floor
    and i gotta wonder inside if i'm missing more
    i think you gotta lotta potential if someone brought it out
    and i got the right lesson in the tip of my mouth
    you got that shirt a little open and i see some pecs
    i bet they look **** good passenger deep in my lex
    we can twist a live one and get into some creation
    i'm not tryna get you gassed; just innovate your imagination
    and see what we can do at the four seasons west
    see i liked your confidence; i'm always after the best
    you seem top-notch; i'm A-1 with reference to share
    you might be employee of the year; let's take it there
    i got a fresh tatt of strawberries overflowin a mouth
    i'm ready to show it out; so what's really good, can we bounce?
    let's get rid of my girls, just buy them a few drinks to go
    and they can find their own whip and we can start the show
    ABOUT 2:30 AM
    let's hit the parkin lot and blow that sweet wind in your stash
    (oh you know how it is; them broads low on cash.)
    3:00 AM
    so let's take your whip and hit the buffet with your boys
    we can all get full; then U & I hit the telly and play with some toys
    i heard it's new after hours on arlington and fifth;
    let me generate your money higher; i hustle with a gift
    5:00 AM
    now you can take them home and sweep me to a 'tel
    we'll get my car up in the morning; let me show you what i do well
    i hope you don't mind the room service; i ordered some lou
    go on and take this shot; i made it just for you
    5:35 AM
    what's the matter Boo? you sleepy well take a rest for a minute
    i got a teddy from Victoria in my purse; i'll go get in it
    and you can see this 48doubleD 28/38 in full frame
    THE NEXT MORNING (CALLING THE HOTEL ROOM)
    Hey what's up? Let me tell you some way my plans got changed
    but if you go to mid-town that's where i left your Range
    i had to borrow your phone but i know you it's all good
    oh- uh- my car in the shop; so i had to get back to the hood
    and my girls said thanks for the trees, the ride, the drinks
    the after hours was fun; don't be mad, i didnt gamble it all;
    i left the kitchen sink
    but i gotta tell you, i'm disappointed in your performance last night
    how could you fall asleep before we got to get right?
    your wallet? i ain't seen it! but don't cancel your card at this time
    when you figure out where your clothes at, your money you'll find.
    so um look even though we never got to blast
    i think we was movin too fast for last night to ever last
    but it was good to have met you- um, whats your name again?
    next time we speak, maybe we can be friends....
    THE MORAL OF THE STORY:
    you see how easy it was? i had you ready so quick
    stupid a**, next time don't think with your d***!
    peace--Ms.Dy
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you snapped. This piece was definatly the :bomb:BOMB:bomb:
    Gonna have to go find more of you in the archives. Girl your poetry is like WHOA!:laugh: But on the real this was off the chain!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    booooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmm!!!!!
    let it be heard !
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey theDynasty1979
    this flow
    is pouring
    nice read
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely an interesting read :) LOL to say the least
     
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