Black Poetry : this game

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Aug 4, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel that heat with you
    but you don't love me
    once you're inside of me
    it's a wrap with the heat that we have
    way down deep
    i want our sex to transcend
    and keep
    but sometimes you have a taste for something different
    and i can't stand that
    my taste is exclusively for you
    so why must you have me and others too
    you know the old saying
    it's because i let you
    but i don't own you
    and you don't own me
    i guess rules are foolish
    but why live dangerously
    we can talk all day long
    meet up and have the grandest time
    but walk away afterwards
    living off of the rewind
    and me wanting more
    even if it's just to hear your posessive tone
    but i can't talk rules
    rules don't apply in this situation
    do i grit my teeth and bear it
    do i continue to share it
    do i flip out and cry when i see the pearl
    sized droplets that come from within' you
    and know that others have them too
    well time will tell
    how long i play this game
    it should be a wrap by now
    my excuses are lame
    just lust and your scent
    wanting that pleasure
    sharing that pain
    guess one day i'll get tired
    of whispering your name
    but for the moment i don't care
    just shut off my feelings and stay right there
    while we feel the heat that we bring forth
    down the road i'm sure we'll both be payin the cost
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, this was really deep. I was truly feelin this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was tyte and very deep too
    ya pen speaking loud & clear
     
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    very nice
    loving this flow
    Peace
     
  5. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you...i appreciate the love and the feedback. i need it.
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving this scribe. yr words are so descriptive.The visualization 4 this is 2 real.I really got chills from this.
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for relating to my poetry...thank you!
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just penned this thought with different words. Crazy how they can put us though so much and we're complaining that we want to give them more?
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    read this twice, girl mos def I'm feelin your style...yeah


    The Dreamer
     
  10. SweetBlack

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    ooo...i've been there. loved it.
     
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