Black Poetry : **** this fool got Love rainin’

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Straight up y’all
    ain’t never felt so mad about a dawg
    ain’t never wanted to explore that fixation called love
    to allow my moral fiber to become undone
    I wonder if this heah will last for long…

    Been telling my sistas
    look the other way
    cuz on your face he’ll make you fall some day
    so busy campainin against mens flaws
    didn’t see when this one caught me by my drawers

    Fell on a tangent, now Iam grasping at straws
    my heart got me torn up with claws
    Y’all this man got me crawling on all fours
    surely scared the hell outta me
    ai’t no way now this one gone leave

    Yet and still here I is
    sraping the floor for what he left me with
    neding this man so desperately
    I am the one who won’t allow love in
    aiding and abetting love, the fool I is

    So understanding I feel for B. with JayZ
    cuz fuh sho this man gots me crazy
    I’ve placed a restraining order on my heart
    just so this fool won’t take it apart
    but y’all he done came in I’m gonna turn my femine ways in

    And all I can say is **** this fool got love rainin’
     
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    nice to see your work again gurl...
    this was incredibly tight...
    i need another fix
    hit me with that ish one mo time...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Dream..where ya been!!!!!!???????

    I missed these pice of yours ..its got you written all over it :) :) Great flow :cool:
     
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    wooooweeeeee! love rainin here
    dis was outstanding flowin' gurl
    hit us wit some mo !!!!
    tyte
    ya time bout to come ...................
     
  5. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been Gone for a minit
    Now I'm back...
    Hey Y'all I have been around, reading y'all stuff. Just been getting used to my new life. Thanx Y'all.
     
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    wow girl!...this was tyte!
     
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    WHOA!!!!!

    This was a **** tyte piece. I really really like this. I can relate. Been there done that. We're on the same page girl.

    Lovin your style.

    Keep em comin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Fell on a tangent, now Iam grasping at straws
    my heart got me torn up with claws
    Y’all this man got me crawling on all fours
    surely scared the hell outta me
    ai’t no way now this one gone leave - Must agree, this is tyte!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just had to read this one again.

    So much emotion in this one here.
    :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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