Quiet Poetry Lounge : This Feeling....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He don’t even know
    As I try to express this feeling
    I get tongue tied….lost in the moment
    Of us being together….
    Slowly….
    He makes me feel whole
    Hoping this feeling don’t go away
    I cry all night if he don’t call
    Scared he forgot bout his kuntry girl
    He makes me….
    Oh yes !!
    And
    I am…
    Slowly giving in…
    Wishing he could see
    Or even feel the things
    He makes me feel

    I would gladly walk a mile with him
    Support him in all he does
    Comfort him at night
    Cook
    Clean
    Love him like a good woman should
    And do the things you do for your man
    He got it just like that

    Within this season
    I am trying to find reason
    Because....
    I am slowly…
    Slowly giving in
    I know he won’t be a part time lover
    To this sweet groove
    Feeling like a musical dove
    I know he was sent from above
    Just for me to
    Love….

    This thing
    Got me twisting
    And dreaming
    Wishing and wondering
    Oh yeah…
    Coming out my midnight
    Slowly giving in….

    It…
    Got me feeling
    Got me yearning
    Got me trusting
    Wanting to enlist
    To be his wife
    For a life time
    I am…
    ….sinking fast
    Praying that it will last
    I want to rock n roll
    Tip and dip
    Just…
    Dance in this sweet romance
    Be his treasure
    And love him in ever measure
    With ever notion
    I know we dance in motion
    As emotions grow
    My love is coming down
    I want to be the flame of his desire
    The sunshine to his day
    The passion he seeks
    And the love he needs

    Starting to get bold
    As this feeling unfolds
    Slowly giving in…
    By this feeling
    I been hurt and filled with pain
    Far too long…
    Little by little he heals my wounds
    Making me feel whole once more
    I want to bathe him in my essence
    As we tangle in this passion affair
    Ready to take a dive
    In this feeling
    So I pray and watch
    Hoping we are a match
    As this feeling grows

    Dayum!
    He got me
    Yes…
    Just like that
    I am slowly….
    Slowly giving in

    (C) 2005
    ~ROSE~FIRE~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this feeling
    that i feel
    is deep yes
    and soulful
    real of waves
    my body crave
    for what da heart
    has gave
    i wanna touch
    in moments of
    time
    and i lone for her
    sweet divine shine
    this feeling
    i know so well
    felt it for years
    as a spell
    this feeling
    if she only knew
    then her love will
    reveal as true
    what tell me what
    can i do , to bring
    this feeling thru.....
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This feeling got me
    Oh ho sweet it is
    As I begin to vision
    And see my dream
    I just wanna scream
    As this feeling
    Take a whole of me
    A rapture of the good kind
    As he do the things he do
    He got it just like that
    A smooth talker
    Sweet and meek
    Got me…
    Slowly giving in…
    My heart beats at a rate
    That I can’t control
    He is
    Dayum this man
    Got me just like that
    Like a spell
    I can’t control myself
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow MzBlk


    " It…
    Got me feeling
    Got me yearning
    Got me trusting
    Wanting to enlist " slowly giving in.
     
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    deep in her eyes
    i get lost from da
    glair of her gleam
    sometime i wanna
    scream as she beckon
    me in to da sway
    of her hips dippin in
    i got this feeling
    i can't express
    but her love i know
    is da best i confess
    this feeling
    this feeling
    oh how i'm taken
    to submission
    from her body mixing
    don't let me come out
    this fall for she is da
    sweetest call
    this feeling i vision
    the one i know
    making me ready fo mo
    this feeling
    do i need to say more....
     
  6. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Im feelin the whole vibe of this piece...Keep flowin, Angel...

    Peace!
     
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