Black Poetry : This Feeling...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got this feeling…
    I can’t explain it…
    It gets deep…
    For I get lost in my words
    No matter how I plan it
    Just feel I can fly

    Just fly…

    High above…Across the sea…
    Through the orbs…Within I see the vision
    Untouched yet claimed within the wind
    As this feeling grows
    You’re too good to be true
    Like you were sent from the blue
    My heaven inside of heaven

    Only you….

    Make me this way
    Comfort in the voice
    Comfort just knowing
    …you care
    I got this feeling
    That leaves me weak
    I can’t explain it…
    It gets deep…

    And I …

    ……Can’t seem to shake it
    I was use too being without
    Then you walked in

    With you….

    I don’t feel the loneness
    When I look inside to find me
    It was empty…a black hole
    ….of lost trust

    But you…

    See my strength
    You see my heart
    And our talks …
    Made me cut them chains
    For me to spread my wings
    …to feel love again
    I prayed and watched
    Then I began to reach…
    Handing you my hand…

    With you…

    My nights I found peace
    My days I found my path
    As my midnight disappeared
    A love I never felt
    Began to grow…
    My strength came from you
    I can’t explain it…
    It gets deep…

    My love flows
    When you laugh
    As I listen to your day
    My joy overflows
    I get this feeling…
    Deep inside
    Knowing this is right

    The more I try to explain
    The more…
    I get tongue tied
    Realizing…
    This is what I want…..

    (C) 2005
    One woman's Heart
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Angel....I USETA feel like this when I had feelings...Anutha great poem written from ya soul...Thanx for sharing!

    Peace,
    Driz
     
  3. LyricallyJacki

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    girl, i wish i was there! good write!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    those feelings i know so well ......awesome write
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If somebody can "tie your tongue" ...then it goes without saying, that's love. beautiful piece poet,
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You described this feeling, so well. That inexplicable feeling that's so right you feel airborn. Such a warm vibe felt in this piece.
     
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    Very Deep MzBlk. Words of rapture. I really like the opening and closing lines. Another great flow. Keep sharing.

    " I got this feeling…
    I can’t explain it…
    It gets deep…
    For I get lost in my words "


    " The more I try to explain
    The more…
    I get tongue tied
    Realizing…
    This is what I want….. "
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :picture: Nice picture angel.... get ya wings and B fly with it. :hi:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a feeling love this poem.
     
  10. Khasm13

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    very nice vibe on this soulful spit...

    one love
    khasm
     
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