Black Poetry : This Ebony Queen Needs

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  1. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You thought you could spit those corny playa lines on me
    Bring me to the same restaurants you took your baby’s mommy
    Neglect me, Take me for granted and ignore my pleads
    Let me break down to you what this Ebony Queen needs

    I need a King who can stand the rain
    Not run with tale between legs at the threat of hardship and pain
    Massage my scalp and rub my feet after working my second full-time job in the home
    Run me a hot bath instead of hanging out with your cousin Jerome

    Read me a sexy novel and serenade me with love songs all night long
    Figure out what size I wear and surprise me with a naughty thong
    Tell me how beautiful I am when I awake in the morn
    Give me my space when I’m feeling worn

    Quench my sexual desires over and over again
    Make me cum first instead of selfishly thinking about the orgasm you tryin’ to obtain
    Spice it up a little and save your nut for last
    The little princess you married is a Queen now and needs more than what you offered in the past

    My needs are ever changing while you seem to remain the same
    But I’ve decided not to get angry, push the issue or place any blame
    You see I’m evolving into a spectacular mold of what God created me to be
    And since I don’t seem to be a priority I’ll just let you be free
    I’m on a mission to find my love so take heed
    The next time you get a woman you’ll know exactly what she needs
     
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    We tend to become settled, especially in a long term relationship, taking a person for granted. Ignoring what the other may want, yet hopefully waking up when they scream what it is they need. And if a piercing scream isn't even heard, well then... Penetrating write poetess.
     
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    Things of the heart are not Defeat or Failure

    Great flow poet
    You can't make yourself any clearer

    He has an advantage
    He has been told
    He knows he should do these things

    I often wonder
    Do we end up or pair with those who we are suppose to help
    Learn something
    How to love
    How to save
    How to get along
    Sometimes you end up with a bad student of life

    Leaving one drained
    Close to being insane
    Almost loosing our health

    Relations can be long term
    Relations can be short
    While they are aboard your vessel
    They shouldn't punch holes in it of course

    Only a fool would not know
    They are sinking the relation
    The ship
    Why don't they grow and know?

    I have learned to look and know
    Who's ship I am on
    No one should give up their own
    Keep it tied to the pole

    Before you got into a relation_SHIP
    You were found sailing
    Doing great on your own

    Don't ever give up your ship
    Keep it handy

    It may be your best come back up or exit
    Only thing that will pull you out of the deep

    A woman should
    Keep a credit card in their maiden name
    To help her get back on her feet

    Luggage is not only for travel
    Long trips to desert isle's
    It can be used
    When you pack anothers things
    Placing them on the outside
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Ebony Queen

    feeling you

    don't sell yourself short

    when you have SO MUCH to offer

    don't let them do it to ya

    really feeling your work poet
     
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    You did the right thing to set him free,
    perhaps that's what he needs to be.
    He will feel the impact of having no Queen
    Only then will he step up, to be that King

    Awesome piece poet!
     
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    Thank You!

    To my Fam: DSS, Queen, Hodee, Sis Watz, and Son of RA

    Moment to moment and Day to Day
    Life seems to continue to have its way
    Will we remain stuck or move with the cheese?
    2008 is sure to be the cure to my disease...

    DSS: You're so right! Sometimes one must shed itself of all impurities in order to see what it has to offer to the world...
    Hodee: "Leaving one drained, Close to being insane, Almost loosing our health"...thanks for the encouragement. So much truth in your words! As washed up as it may be I've decided to save my ship!
    Son of RA: Thank you for the love!
    Sis. Watz: Sistah you said it all! Once the blinders are off...well then...
    Queen: Its a shame that sometimes the extreme has to happen before the good can manifest itself...but 'tis life sometimes.

    Thank you for the love and I look forward to "rising" with you in 2008!
     
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    The journey.

    :climb: Meet you at the TOP, Sistah!
     
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    Thank you my sweet Sis. Z! I might need you to help pull me up along the way!
     
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    yeah.. grl.. spit the truth ^^^^
     
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