Black Poetry : " this can't be it " ( a spin from khasm's piece )

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Mar 2, 2006.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... just thought l'd add my 3 cents.. since
    i understand the man khasm...
    it's more to a climax than an orgasm
    and more to black pain than a freak's back spasm...
    and more to black joy than a one night- "them draws- gotta have'm"
    peace to Destee and the poets that kick it here
    but **** l'm glad it's not some of y'all's career
    because wackness on any mic is a poet's biggest fear
    and slackness of the like...
    as i wonder when certain sexy poets will shift the gear
    ... ****... hadn't seen most of the tyte ones here in a year
    and now we got crickets chirpin' in the atmosphere...
    but i swear it's not a dis...
    i "open mic" it often like a few poets i know here personally... just gave this forum a temporary kiss
    goodbye
    and thanks to khasm for bringing it to your attention
    cuz in my book you have to be a true poet for the honorable mention... not only" a roses are red violets are blue poet"
    now tell the dun what it do poet cuz i know this aint it...
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i can say to this is




    OKKKKKKKAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :bullseye: :bye:
     
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    Thats wahat im saying
    They need to switch the game
    Come with that thunder
    Lyrics ear split your brain
    While poets all about sex
    I diversify myself
    With mental unstableness
    While other poets keep fading
    Im in the sun blue blockers and shades
    5 mansions and maids
    Poets step it up
    My lyrics blow others
    Off the poetic set like hand grenades
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop on da mental.........poeticly
     
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