Black Poetry : This Angel....

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i met an angel in crowded train..
    it was loud from the tracks grindin',
    makin that sound that kinda pounds ya brain..
    as my car screeched by 8th Street,
    I stared at her features..
    she wasn't white or black she was clear as day..
    She smiled at me in a flirtacious way
    I cracked one back after a short delay
    I wanted to ask her where her wings were
    and why she took the train
    when she could fly like a butterfly
    and when she would cry ,it rained...
    after a short pause ,and a graffiti artist leaving his mark
    we stood shoulder to shoulder as the train went dark
    i was frozen there next to her, my mind went blank
    i felt heaven enter me and fill my frame
    i would've loved to videotape this experience
    cause i cant fully explain
    she was what happiness embodied
    and if i could draw ,i'd paint her
    She brought me back to God ,
    only if i could've thanked her.....



    my angel was simply a lady who, in the midst of all this corruption,hatred and negativity in the world today,was able to put her hand on a strangers shoulder and tell me everything will be ok...

    love is love

    peace
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    cool stuff man

    feeling the growth

    the signs are there

    it's great when you can see the

    signs and appreciate them
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey Lurk this was real and felt sho ya right i know just what u mean man...
     
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    You really take the reader there, to that spiritual moment. Quite a peaceful read, poet.
     
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    WOW!!!! This is awesome.
    The scribe was short but said so much.
    Really awesome.


    Much Luv
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for allowing me to share that experience and for understanding...time to check out some of your pieces...i need inspiration...
     
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    THIS WAS FABULOUS!

    And thank you SO much for it! It made my day! I rejoiced with you and for you in this experience!

    Your descriptive language is ON POINT! I WAS THERE!
     
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