Black Poetry : This Ain't No **** Peace

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm hot tonight
    And I can't help but fight
    Not physically but mentally for what's right
    I'm gettin tired of just sitting and standin around in the night
    For today I will make tha night the bright
    Cause I got a lot of steam
    By this I mean
    I have a lot to talk about and alot to redeem

    Men beating their wife
    Sellin to their OWN causing cultural strife
    Shoting and bangin..............taking our own life
    Causing genocides
    Multiple homicides
    Without morals or mental laws to abide
    Just a lost soul without a heart to confide
    Until we're left with yet another brother that died
    Let's ride!!!!

    Women........it's gettin' real sad
    I look at ya'll........and sumtimes I can't be glad
    Just thinking of a girl so young f***ing some one eles's dad
    Make me want to gag
    Prostituting on corners..............girl you make us look bad
    Don't take offense ladies it's probably not you
    It's just in my world..........that's what I've seen a lot of them go through
    But if it is you............s**t..............you just can't continue to do what you do
    Messin up your body until you're nothin but a strivled up prune
    Let's rise sistahs and get this party back in tune
    And soon
    We'll have peace before anyone ever knew

    Bush.....please let’s not get on the bush
    A man that takes turns for the worst
    raising taxes and making them the most of the most
    AIDS in Africa is now a back track
    Because the REAL problem now is the oil in Iraq
    The nuclear bombs in Afghanistan
    And the war over in a middle east land
    A man who keeps his business on the hush
    Until the problem becomes a rush
    A deep rash
    Look at September 11th
    Where death was predestined
    Didn’t want to do nothing
    Just sit in his office facility
    Until the tragedy
    Became our ultimate reality
    Bush is just a fatality
    Or our present day reality

    Let take care of these chilin’
    Before they become felons
    Creating future hard knock rebellions
    Not tomorrow but today and
    And every day after....let’s make it a million
    For real and
    Teach them that life is hard
    But it’s their part
    To choose the right card
    To make it peaceful in a gullible regard
    Teach them that guns
    Ain’t fun
    And that their dum
    If they think sellin **** on a corner
    Will make them a future millionaire drug dealer
    Let’s be realer
    The better
    Statistic would place them with a coroner
    Let’s teach them that showing off their bodies
    To hard know southside shorties
    And having their babies
    Don’t make you as tough as the next lady
    But baby
    It make you ignorant and crazy
    Lord save me

    If I thought this was going to be my last day on this earth
    I want to go away knowing I sent a message to the future
    Telling them I was sorry that I created some of the problems for them
    And that if I could I would change my life and give grace to them
    I know I ain’t no saint
    No where near that I ain’t
    But I would die or faint
    If I left without spreading the word
    That we need to do something positive to this world
    Create peace
    And trace
    Grace
    Back from Africa
    To the United States in front of ya
    Let’s unite
    And make this **** right
    Aiight
    Make it bright
    And not just another dim light
    Take this **** to another height
    Make it right
    Cause this ain’t no [email protected] peace
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot for the right cause this was phat & tyte sis....
     
  3. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this piece was a real eye opener, it makes you sit back and reevaluate everything going on around me , from a personal to a national level. I absolutely loved ya flow in here..."Keep Em Comin"...1 :hearts2: :welldone: :hearts2:
     
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    Laying down the truth about what you see daily, make you wanna holla, so you do so in your flow. I hear ya sis.
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks family for truly feelsing and seeing what I had to say.

    Much luv,
    kraze
    :kick:
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the beat goes on....
    I feel every word spoken and it's sad to know ...to no avail *smh* ...but all the same "we know" thanks for the wisdom you spilled.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You always know how to throw down the hard intellectual in style, young sister. As always, :welldone:
     
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    im always lovng ur words
     
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    sista, sista, sista. my applause to you for laying it down. great flow thanks for sharing
     
  10. Ladysoul

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    This really made me sit back and think. Everyone really needs to read this. It's excellent
     
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