Black Poetry : This aint it.... (under pressure)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This right now it aint it....
    though it is what it is...
    i,m not shure of this..
    Everyone is responsible for his own actions....
    but we are not for other ones...
    I looked up the word Presure....
    i so convinsed that there isnt anyone out there..
    who likes to dwell over pain...
    I believe that everyone wants sun after the rain...
    Its a matter of time and strength...


    who sees pain as their best friend..
    never that...
    I know what were the good thing......
    i recodnise it as a lightningflash..

    Gods love...

    a flower..

    the sun...

    a huge...


    a touch..


    a good talk....


    a childs smile....


    nice food ...


    ice cream....


    nature..


    love ....


    But this .....how i feel right now...
    this aint it....
    i know its a part of it...
    making me grow...
    god who is guiding his children home....
    there is sumthing better out there ...eternal life after this world ends...
    that doesnt mean I,m not thankfull for this life for what i have...

    But there is the underpresor...
    and being underpresure...
    I just know this i have read of this...
    and it aint bull****...


    (thought of the underpresor)

    Go and stand there on that bridge ...Like that jewish little guy In saterday night fever going like ""'LOOK LOOK DAD LOOK LOOK WHAT I,m DOING ......GOOD HUH look I,m Famous ....LOOK I,m UP....ARE YOU PROUD OF ME NOW ?????"" and make a fool of myself..........


    (thought of being underpresure)

    I dont care those are ignorant words he doesnt know better .He loves me and i am proud of myself for hanging on in their trough all the **** some put me through....I,m not going to let nobody bring me down...I,m not going to let you win mister D....My hopes are on jesus christ my savior..and he promised us a better time and a better world after this one.........and my time has not come yet Only for god to take......
    and my dad he is just grew up like that i just remembered that on his jubelium he said......""well i didn,nt turned out to be a professor...but you know i have workd hard all my life....and i said to him ........YEs Pa and i am so proud of you .....and god is to and You re maybe wiser than a lot of proffesor ...except for the woman thing you gotta work on that a little bit..""



    Yeah .....

    you go on...
    do youre thang..
    my tears are growing More and more
    and stronger maybe...
    but they not for you...
    not....
    You hear me...
    Thy not.....
    aight..
    they for jesus...
    jesus christ..
    thats right...


    These thing youre telling me...
    ya know voices like i maybe cursed or sumthing...
    you see that is were you get me wrong....
    I,m so full aware i,m blessed with manny things...
    though you see me walking a lone in the streets...
    aha you didnt saw who is walking next to me..
    holding my hand....
    yeah i cry i cry..
    but he is my friend...
    jesus christ..
    and i hope with faith and gods will to the End....

    and i will praise His name....

    scream it out of my longs ...

    When i will sing.......



    you heard me ...

    this thing youre telling me...


    This aint it....




    I,m under Pressure....





    but God sets



    me free......



    Remember......

    hold on ....


    this aint it...
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tyte piece sis...
    this world is only a test
    to seperate darkness and light...keep pen'n ya thoughts
    i like em....
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with khasm....this is tyte...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya sis.... tyte drop
     
  5. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    str8 fiya

    complex but simple
    simple but beautiful
    good job sis by the way im feelin the name
    set these minds free :star: :star: :star:
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all :heart:.

    for youre support read and love..





    Love L
     
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    flow the release sis
    very deep indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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