Quiet Poetry Lounge : This Afternoon...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dior Robynsonne, May 3, 2004.

  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm
    This afternoon
    I woke up feeling
    wonderfully lazy and
    satiated beyond compare.
    This afternoon
    my lover
    loved me to perfection.
    I was exclusively
    ministered to on every level
    physically by the love of my life.
    This afternoon,
    my lover worked me over so much,
    that I flirted twice with the thought
    of her being my wife.
    This afternoon,
    I woke up to
    the sunlight being nosy,
    peeking in through my
    partially closed Venetian blinds for
    a glimpse
    of my sex-filled body
    as it laid there in some form of
    sweet hibernation.
    Hmmmmmmm Lord,
    This afternoon I woke up to
    thoughts of earth toned caresses
    and spring time breezes,
    with summer induced kisses over my
    smoked honey terrain.
    This afternoon I woke up
    to clear skies and
    black birds that fly,
    and silver rain that didn't fall, but
    instead would rise,
    and looking at the clock I realize
    that time does fly.
    But this afternoon i'm feeling
    so full and complete with a glow to
    my skin and a sparkle in my eyes.
    This afternoon I woke up to a brand
    new life in my lover and my best friend.
    This afternoon I woke
    up a new creature, feeling as fresh and
    different as though I had been baptised;
    speaking in tongues and
    praising God for a new day and in the moment
    that I realized.
    This afternoon I woke up feeling
    re-born and free as a dove,
    This afternoon
    I woke up feeling so, so, so filled and in love.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/"Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow bruh
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate your love pa. Once again you are a blessing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you lured us into this erotic afterglow, and I think I can speak for most in this case, it's very hard to leave.
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am very much appreciative of your brand of love. God bless.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you mama. I appreciate the love.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dior Robynsonne,
    i went looking for another of your pieces and found this one to be a nice quality write with such vivid symbolism (simile).
    Write on..............nice pen....POTW.......

    Peace and Blessings....
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice srcipt of the pen
    I feel absorb:)
    very nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: :angel1:
    :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: Rasheed, brotha you are a blessing and inspiration. Thank you so much for your love and support. :angel1: :angel1: :angel1:
     
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