Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Apr 10, 2009.
my interest my intellect my curiosities-
have bubbled overflowing so in search of that unforgettable flow
that so fearlessly flawlessly flies through the lexicon
hahahaha....you're the first one on this site to use this word in poetic form from all the poem's i've read....good ish!
well...you already know what i think....i'm ova here dying of thirst
my tongue is dry as a baked clam....lol
nah but for real forreal....this was dope as hell sis...drop more please...
First of all, your use of alliteration was off the hook, and I thoroughly enjoyed those witty asides like...
You described that craving for poetic nourishment to a "T", probably because that's the same letter the word talented begins with. Do flow on!
Oh, my Lord!
Sistah, you just go on make as many "sequels" or "addendums" or "amendments" YOU WANNA!
This was tha
And if you got some more in ya, I'll be waiting!
and you wonder why they call you the "enlightened one."
can somebody pleeeze get that gurl a drink of tea
or maybe an extra LARGE sip of me...
no...NO. I didn't say that
what i m e a n t was
would you share a sip (with me)
of something cool
trying to catch your breath
let me caress away the whispers
of yesterday's melodies
in such a way
that tomorrow comes
S L o w l Y
i had a moment to spend
to give to that sistah
you know the one
...that thirsty one
who need poetic refreshments
to quench her thirst
let me be the first
to offer her
and the river floweth.
and years after the first release
I still return to the watering hole for my relief
Looking to find that piece of mind
That stems from the mind melding mystic propensities
Of a lividly lyrically laced line of poetry
OH my I know how this feels. I think I am here at this point
right now. Loving this piece.
O' my this whole joint took me in
please pass her a big glass for the thirst
is bigger then we may know i love this flow
and i want mo mo mo !!!!
I'm so thirsty now !!!!
u blew this one up like da red barn ......str8 fire sis
i stay trying to keep my lip wet
so we speak the SAME language
I LOVING YOUR WORK HERE
I BOW IN YOUR PRESENCE
triniti - "Being caught just once is all that's needed to prime this yearning with a need to feed it." It's a dryness that we poets with the Thirst must feed to reinvigorate our creative juices when they diminish and evaporate to an undesireable level and our frustrations begin to show those lack-of-liquid cracks. Keep writing those sequels, addendums and amendments. They quench our thirst. Very nice and perceptive work Triniti. Namyh
P.S. - Now ! Somebody get me a Gatorade with a gin chaser. I'm too thirsty. Whew!
Thank you Family
lol Thank you brother Khasm for the read and the props you know how sometimes the right word just makes the flow go down so smooth you got to use it Thank you brother
Only a poet or a writer could give a compliment like that and I humbly and graciously accept sister I couldnt be more flattered cause I sho do love me my alliterations lol my time between postings is so sporadic sister but you are always holding it down Thank you sister.
Sister Cherry I just love your spirit what took you so long to come home sistah? you had me crackin up lol From a poet as talented and passionate as yourself Im flattered and humbled by the props. Thank you sister
LOL @ i didnt say that
you're always the poetic gentlemen
and you do nothing but offer up some of that goooood stuff
Thank you so much brother Baller for gracing my space with ya signature swagger. Thanks again
Me and you both sister me and you both
I think any appreciator of good poetry gets thirsty afterawhile Thank you for the read sister
LOL you made me smile at mo mo mo lol
Youre such a supporter of the poetry forum brother Rich
Im always glad to read you
Thank you for reading me
So we do brother DSS so we do
and im humbled by your props
Cause i know you stay like a poetic black knight slaying ignorance and promoting truth
Thank you again brother Da Street So'ja
WoW Gatorade with the gin chaser huh? lol
thats a mix for some movement for real lol
Thank you for the read and the kudos brother HH
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