Black Poetry : ...Thirsty...

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  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my interest my intellect my curiosities-
    have bubbled overflowing so in search of that unforgettable flow
    that so fearlessly flawlessly flies through the lexicon



    hahahaha....you're the first one on this site to use this word in poetic form from all the poem's i've read....good ish!
    well...you already know what i think....i'm ova here dying of thirst
    my tongue is dry as a baked clam....lol
    nah but for real forreal....this was dope as hell sis...drop more please...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    First of all, your use of alliteration was off the hook, and I thoroughly enjoyed those witty asides like...
    You described that craving for poetic nourishment to a "T", probably because that's the same letter the word talented begins with. Do flow on!
     
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    Oh, my Lord! :jumping:

    Sistah, you just go on make as many "sequels" or "addendums" or "amendments" YOU WANNA!

    This was tha :bomb:

    And if you got some more in ya, I'll be waiting!
     
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    well...weLL...WELL.

    and you wonder why they call you the "enlightened one."

    can somebody pleeeze get that gurl a drink of tea
    or maybe an extra LARGE sip of me...

    no...NO. I didn't say that

    what i m e a n t was

    this.

    would you share a sip (with me)
    of something cool
    and
    satisfying
    while
    trying to catch your breath
    let me caress away the whispers
    of yesterday's melodies
    in such a way
    that tomorrow comes
    S L o w l Y
    if only
    i had a moment to spend
    ...to share
    to give to that sistah
    right there
    you know the one
    ...that thirsty one
    who need poetic refreshments
    to quench her thirst
    let me be the first
    to offer her
    SOME
    refresh(ness)


    and the river floweth.
     
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    and years after the first release
    I still return to the watering hole for my relief
    Looking to find that piece of mind
    That stems from the mind melding mystic propensities
    Of a lividly lyrically laced line of poetry


    OH my I know how this feels. I think I am here at this point
    right now. Loving this piece.
     
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    O' my this whole joint took me in
    please pass her a big glass for the thirst
    is bigger then we may know i love this flow
    and i want mo mo mo !!!!

    I'm so thirsty now !!!!
    u blew this one up like da red barn ......str8 fire sis
     
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    i stay trying to keep my lip wet

    so we speak the SAME language

    I LOVING YOUR WORK HERE

    I BOW IN YOUR PRESENCE

    :bowdown:
     
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    triniti - "Being caught just once is all that's needed to prime this yearning with a need to feed it." It's a dryness that we poets with the Thirst must feed to reinvigorate our creative juices when they diminish and evaporate to an undesireable level and our frustrations begin to show those lack-of-liquid cracks. Keep writing those sequels, addendums and amendments. They quench our thirst. Very nice and perceptive work Triniti. Namyh

    P.S. - Now ! Somebody get me a Gatorade with a gin chaser. I'm too thirsty. Whew!
     
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    Thank you Family :)

    lol Thank you brother Khasm for the read and the props you know how sometimes the right word just makes the flow go down so smooth you got to use it :) Thank you brother :grouphug:


    Only a poet or a writer could give a compliment like that :) and I humbly and graciously accept sister :) I couldnt be more flattered cause I sho do love me my alliterations lol my time between postings is so sporadic sister but you are always holding it down :) Thank you sister. :grouphug:


    Sister Cherry :lol: I just love your spirit :) what took you so long to come home sistah? :) you had me crackin up lol From a poet as talented and passionate as yourself Im flattered and humbled by the props. Thank you sister :grouphug:



    LOL @ i didnt say that
    you're always the poetic gentlemen :)
    and you do nothing but offer up some of that goooood stuff ;)
    Thank you so much brother Baller for gracing my space with ya signature swagger. Thanks again :grouphug:


    Me and you both sister me and you both :)
    I think any appreciator of good poetry gets thirsty afterawhile :) Thank you for the read sister :grouphug:


    LOL you made me smile at mo mo mo lol
    Youre such a supporter of the poetry forum brother Rich
    Im always glad to read you :)
    Thank you for reading me :grouphug:


    So we do brother DSS so we do
    and im humbled by your props :blush:
    Cause i know you stay like a poetic black knight slaying ignorance and promoting truth :read:
    Thank you again brother Da Street So'ja :grouphug:


    WoW Gatorade with the gin chaser huh? lol
    thats a mix for some movement for real lol
    Thank you for the read and the kudos brother HH :grouphug:
     
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