Black Poetry : Thirsting for you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aminata, Apr 24, 2002.

  1. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hard day at work
    95 degrees and

    the heat is
    on

    gone to the park to
    get on my...work out

    fellas ballin

    strong arms
    big legs and

    B u L G i N G 'P o C k E t S'

    can't wait to get home and find you

    approach you

    e x p o s e d

    and I...

    wrap hands

    ..A
    .......R
    ...........O
    ..........U
    ......N
    ..D

    the
    WHOLE
    of you

    hands
    shiver at the touch of your
    exterior

    and my
    interior

    is

    l a c t a t i n g

    as lips cautiously approach
    g R a Z in G

    the tip

    I get a whiff of
    the essence of YOU

    beany
    sweet

    and I...

    S a l i V a T e

    A n t i C i p a T e

    the taste of what I love so much...











    Chocolate Soymilk:eek: :rolleyes: :laugh: :angel1:
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whatchu say?!!! whoo! this will make a brotha leave work early!...too hot, too hot!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hot?
    this piece is hot
    the style and all
    loving it

    dssNY
    down in southeastern New York State
     
  4. MentalEruptions

    MentalEruptions Member MEMBER

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    Minita , this is ya girl nappy_thoughts(BSTATE). i just WANTED TO TELLU THAT I KNOW WHAT YA TALKIN ABOUT.
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read this earlier sis... now I'm in private and I can say this... "DAYUM this is GOOD!!!!" Diggin this very much!!!!

    alyce
     
  6. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i never read you before

    i like this..........
    you should post more
    lovin the creative way in which you put this together
     
  7. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh, Makes your mouth water, don't it..
     
  8. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This hit the spot!

    Bert
     
  9. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's soooo damned good I'm...

    stocked for a month or two!!!!!:toast:
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You showing out now!

    Girrrrrrrrrrrrrl! You just cuttin up all up in here with these innuendo's. I got my mug ready...:toast: :lol:
    I love to read you , I never know if you going deep or wide.
    But I know I will always feel it inside.
    You da bomb sis!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!