Black Poetry : thinking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NicoleM, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do you want to know where my heart goes
    when my mind is in the throes
    of thinking about you
    brown eyes
    your profile is so nice
    the bridge of your nose
    and how the line flows
    to your lips below
    i love your mouth
    watching you talk makes me wanna go down south
    and share my throat
    with you
    take note
    i'm in love boo
    it's a simple thing to deduce
    you have to feel my eyes all over you
    for once not forcing myself
    but actually catching a glimpse
    here and there
    using some semblance of stealth
    like walking behind
    and allowing the shape of your shoulders to blow my mind
    have I told you that you are one of a kind
    not ordinary
    your mind flows with mine
    and all I want is you
    my life is good
    great even
    but not being yours
    is an untimely drought
    out of season
    no identifiable reason
    for crop failure
    just dead weeds
    ungerminated seeds
    and mysterious death
    at dawn
    I'm a pawn in the hands of some angry architect
    who's idea of fun is orchestrating the great disconnect
    did I mention that I love you
    like really I do
    maybe I am a total fool
    maybe knowing you has taken me to school
    and given me emotional tools
    will I ever love another
    I doubt it
    unless he is like you and then some
    and has that same winsome
    smile
    that appears behind my eyelids in the middle of the night
    when we are separated by miles
    do you know that I dream about you
    that I see scenes in your life before you do
    and when you call and let me know
    that my sleeping mind has sent me a prophetic interjection
    I ask myself, "what is this strange connection?"
    that I wanted to ignore
    because I'm not crazy
    I know that it will leave my heart sore
    and spent
    and that long after you have come and went
    I will have the residue
    of loving you
    all over me
    and maybe that's not such a bad thing
    at least now I know a thing or two about loving
    beyond what you bring
    beyond the song you sing
    beyond what my eyes see
    loving in spite of me
    or you
    I would give my whole self into your hands gladly
    trusting every place you would lead me
    did you see how I made love to you unabashadly
    and how easily my body said yes
    to your hands on me
    it's because of that thing inside you pulling
    that thing inside of me
    and yet running and hiding
    when I capitulate fully
    do you know that I'm yours
    You don't even need a receipt
    to validate
    I'll wait

    (c) 2004 nicole mitchell
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!
    very nicely done u scribe it so well
    flow head on
     
  3. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you



    THANK YOU!!!!!!
     
  4. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NicoleM what a love poem
    you disclosed youself poeticly
    I have been there, thank you!
     
  5. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Alphamale. ;-)
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW WOW WOW...the insanity of love...

    I LOVE IT...I LOVE IT...I LOVE IT....

    Did I mention that I love it...

    I have sooooo felt this before...

    but you scribed it soooooo well...WOW

    This tugged at the heart strings... :crying:

    Below are my favorite lines...



    Encore :spinstar:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That need to be with the one you love, yet always there with him somehow because the connection between you is so strong. This was emotively wonderful.
     
  8. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage & whatizinaname

    thank you...that's right the connection is so strong. it's wierd and cool at the same time.
     
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