Black Poetry : Thinking out Loud

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Apr 23, 2001.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Though face-to-face we have never met
    Yet in my heart your words I cannot forget
    A picture I have, simply an image of thee
    Serves as the only true connection that I have of my desired queen
    Speaking in tyme
    Verses and rhyme
    I wonder if one day you will be mine
    Just a dream I have, simply a fantasy
    Yet I hold on to hope that one day it will become reality
    The words I say are true
    Yet I wonder if that’s the way it’s interpreted by you
    Can you feel my heart in the words I scribe?
    Can you imagine yourself residing in the House of Light?
    Can you share my pain knowing you are not with me?
    Will you allow my passion to make love to thee?
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool flow blak man. If she's listening she will be answering if she reads this ,abstractly or concretely, she will answer.

    one love, blak
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...

    ...*Wishing I had, such, an admirer*. I got so into this, I imagined these words were for me. A wonderful, dedication, Bish. How do you do what you do??? :lovestruc
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice.

    BE
     
  5. 8th wonder

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    um um um....
    feelin this....

    8th!
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One word 4 U 2day.....

    WWWWWWWwwwwwwwOOOOOwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWW!!
     
  7. Afridancr

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    mmmmmmm...?

    My imagination has gotten
    the best of me
    inhaling this heartfelt poetry
    so seemingly clear and
    honestly true
    wait...did my heart just
    flutter for you?

    Wondering if this
    could really be
    me for you~
    you for me~

    I'll just pray to
    God~
    Wait and see if
    YOU're the one HE
    Reveals to ME


    *looking up at the LightHouse*


    See how you've got me
    replying to Thee?
    Thanks for inspiring me!:)
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BISHOP.....

    & the answers to the last 4 questions are...

    yes
    yes
    yes
    & yes... :)

    this was sweet & i agree with VERB... she'll answer!
    how could she not?!?!

    Peace...
    Mz Sunshyne~ :)
     
  9. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    sounds as though two hearts have met
    bound to get even better yet
    while i'm not psychic, can't read the stars
    a love like this can't remain afar
    i have no doubt you two will meet
    life just wouldn't be complete
    this type of love that you render
    all things in life gladly surrender
    allowing her to come to you
    or you to her, this love is true
    just let us know when you depart
    cause she's got the Bishop's heart

    beautiful peace Bishop

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  10. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just...

    ...felt the need to ogle at this one again, Bish...:)
    you don't know how much I am loving this piece, truly...:lovestruc
     
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