Black Poetry : Thinking of You

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Here i am today thinking of you
    and all the things i want to say that's true
    with you all day on my mind
    wondering if we would ever shine

    Then i had a thought of no
    because our friendship dat's so close
    every visit grips me more
    speaks to me way down to da core

    I know we are this special kind of friends
    the way we mix and how we mend
    but i wonder if there's something deep within
    if we pass go will it be a sin

    Sitting here thinking of you today
    on my mind is where you lay
    wishing you would and if you may
    give me a chance a worthy play

    I saw ya face in da dept of my mind
    smiling at me that now is da time
    but through ya words upon my ear
    say friends is what so dear

    As i stumble up against this wall
    yet i can hear ya beckoning call
    to be held and love divine
    yet knowing now not da time

    so all i can do is linger right on
    thinking of you wit my love song
    to have and hold with feelings so strong
    shaking my head to leave these thoughts alone

    With you on my mind today
    thinking of you in every sweet way
    and a victim of ya prey
    knowing all this seem out of place
    Just~Thinking !
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was just thinking
    I would love for you to be sinking
    Into my inner spaces
    And have our own trading spaces
    Cause I want to transcend my friend role
    and know you alll the way down to your soul
    But I know I wouldn't want to risk losing you as a friend
    So I this thought must quickly come to an abrupt end........

    But I want you to know what I was thinking
     
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    wow....asmiplepoet !

    Beyond all my mental thoughts
    as i was thinking what it would be like
    yet knowning this not right
    but yet you lay on my mind tonight
    our friendship is bigger wit delight
    do these feeling my heart must fight
    so we don't lose our sight
    but if i had one wish to pull from da dish
    it would be to have and hold
    love unconditional but we friend right
    so i better turn off tis thinking light
    just thinking so more !
     
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    in the light and in the dark
    u are whats in my heart
    why i can't help thinking of u
    how can this not be true
    torn between what is and what cloud be

    looking at u
    the world i see
    when i poor out my serects
    i dont have to wonder how u keep them
    close to u
    like i long to be
    so close but so far
    friendship shouldnt be so hard
    the respect i have will keep me paused

    thinking of holding u close
    thinking of who loves who the most
    pet names
    petting games
    i guess i have to just keep thinking and enjoying my thought
    this is the way friendships end the worst

    so for now i wont cross the line
    i just can't help it
    it will always be on my mind

     
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    O' gosh my goodness beautifulblkw

    For so long i held you there
    wit thoughts and sweet lovin care
    thinking of you deep on my mind
    such a feeling dearing and divine
    but we know what is true
    us together makes our friendship unglue
    but in my mind , it's only you
    on da shores of my heart
    yet so friendly where do we start
    wait let me stop !
    all this making me hot
    and our friendship means much more
    but wooo-weeee.... babe
    what my mind have in store
    did you know how i love u even more
    just thinking while on da floor
    not to break our friendship core
    but in my mental you're be there
    always know I truely care
    Thinking big !


     
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    ......$$RICH$$.......
    it's kinda hard
    to say what i won't do
    cause in my heart i hear you
    this is not new nor is it untrue
    i'm deeply
    involved in wanting to hold you
    just thinking
    gets in my way of all the times i wanted to ask you to stay
    just thinking maybe friends not such a bad thing
    i see u at my door
    i see us doing more
    i see a happen ending
    i just want to stop pretending
    i want to believe
    your smile tells me it is a mistake
    but i want you to want me
    and i think you do
    i think this is just as hard for you
    so get out of my head for just a min
    let me
    think clear............................



     
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    Just Thinking

    beautifulblkw
    :hearthis:
    Through my whispers hear me good

    like a sweet lovin queen would
    each echo of my voice
    rush deep wit a vision & choice
    let thee heart hear my song
    yet we lay between right & wrong
    our friendship is what makes us grand
    but yet i need love like any man
    just thinking deeper boo!
    no need to pretend
    joining hand is no sin
    but yet we are loyal friends
    can i , is this a win win trend
    or am i just dreammin again
    give me you above any mistake
    please dear don't make me wait
    there is nothing fake
    while i'm up late just thinking of u
    how u stay on my mind
    Thinking we two of a kind
    feeling you line by line
    at ya door to bring new sunshine
    knock knock !
    Thinking
    :qqb015:
     
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    asimplepoet
    This is nice.
    I like this

     
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    Way to drop it poet.
    Yea
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :terrific:Real nice.
     
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