Black Poetry : Thinking of you

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I close my eyes I think of you.
    Just the thought of you makes me wet.
    Me on top of you riding you slow savoring every sensation.
    Your hands on my breast rubbing them softly.
    I lower myself so you can suck my nipples.
    Mmm I'm so wet now my hands between my legs,
    eyes closed shut thinking of you.
    You turn me over on my back legs are put on your shoulders.
    Ahh that feels good.
    My fingers moving in and out as I think of you.
    Your looking in my eyes as you slide in and out of me.
    My heart is racing even faster
    about to jump out of my chest.
    I'm now on your lap moving my hips back and forth.
    Screaming your name as I move my fingers in and out
    getting closer to orgasm.
    Moving my hips faster.
    Moving my fingers faster.
    I'm moaning louder as I get closer.
    Ahh yes I say over and over.
    I came all over as my eyes closed shut thinking of you
     
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    woooooooweeeeeeeee!
    the thought of thee a we
    moaning deeper sweeter
    feeling da rapture in glist
    where two mend and twist
    cascading love as i close
    my eyez and think of u !!!!!

    Da Passion
     
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    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really love your replies. Thank you.
     
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    most welcome your work bring that out in me !
     
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    Talk about fire and desire, whew, the heat has been turned up to extreme.
     
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    Hey FattnBeautiful
    Wow! This is a wonderful love poem
    I just love , love poems..Your flow have
    Do give the reader a wonderful sensation of the passion you have placed
    In this flow. Wonderful!

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    FattnBeautiful, this flow is off the chain! You've inspired me!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful, Hot and steamy drop poet, thanks for sharing it.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    you got any napkins?

    lol
     
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