Black Poetry : Thinking of You

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  1. Velvet Majesto

    Velvet Majesto Member MEMBER

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    Thinking of You



    Sometimes I just sit back
    relax and think of you

    I remember that wonderful
    night we danced together
    purple was the color of your dress and summer was the weather
    I think of you

    All those long phone conversations calling each other
    talking about nothing and everything freely with no hesitation
    I think of you

    Your gentle touch but strong hold
    caressing the delves of my very soul when your arms unfold to embrace me
    I think of you

    Your eyes, big brown eyes speak to my heart and never lie
    lit up like a firefly I stare deep inside and its clear why your essence consumes me
    I think of you

    Your smile, such a warm and beautiful smile… mouth of a Nubian goddess floating atop the river Nile
    taking my breath away like I’ve ran for miles… girl
    I think of you

    “I think I might wife her, u know… powder blue Roc-A-Wear suit white Nike her”
    That’s what I’ll do
    because you’ve captured my heart, from day one I knew it was true
    I think of you

    I think of you and I wonder
    how you’re doing now
    are you happy
    are you well
    Girl you’re the origin of which these words swell
    In my mind



    Sitting here relaxing and remembering you and our good-ole times
    presently… things have gotten better with age like fine wine
    I realize how much I miss you
    How I should be with you
    How you should be with me exclusively
    How much I need you and yearn to feel your
    soft lips upon my face melting and reducing me… your voice telling me how much
    you miss me
    You’ve marked my heart permanently, these feelings can’t be erased
    Sometimes I just sit back
    relax and think of you

    With a smile on my face
    I think of you

    In the waking moments of the day
    I think of you

    When the day’s over and I go to lay
    I think of you

    Its just something special you do
    that after 3 years has me still sitting back
    in this relaxed state of being and still Thinking of You.
     
  2. Velvet Majesto

    Velvet Majesto Member MEMBER

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    C'mon, show a brotha some love. I'm new lol! :cool:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa! thie scribe is tyte,
    you outta do it on the mic.
    never heard nothing like this,
    it's finer than jewels like criss.
    make a sistah heart skip a beat,
    and got me locked in my seat.
    and thinking to myself,
    could the one you're thinking of be myself?
    but i know that ain't right or true,
    cuz i'm too busy thinking--if the person you scribin' about is thinking about you.......(tyte scribe brotha---waitin' for more) :hot:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Velvet Majesto :wave:

    Beautifully crafted flow...I love the affirmations of "I think of you"...
    they really create a heavenly echo throughout your piece...
    Great to have you as a part of the family...Please share more!
    I'll look for you!

    Peace & Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed brutha
    da warmth of dis scribe is tyte
    welcome to the destee.com playground
    of poetic vibing happy u here upon us
    flow on as love is given
    think of her as the sweet release flow
    sho ya right flow head brutha
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh...and do join us on the mic...

    Friday Night Poetry ThrowDown! @ 8 p ET :spin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The love is sometimes slow in coming, but it will come your way. This was such a peaceful and caring piece. I'd like to read some more.
     
  8. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was real i felt u on that and i gotta give u love it was real deep
     
  9. Velvet Majesto

    Velvet Majesto Member MEMBER

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    Thank u all. I really appreciate it coming from other poets. I edited this poem as well n made it flow beter n added a few more lines to give it to my girl. (not the version seen above)


    I'm a mos def. be droppin some more stuff here n get down with tha spoken part of thangs.


    Thanx
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and Welcome:wave:
    this is a lovely poem:)
    please do flow more
    lovely indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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