Black Poetry : Thinking of 06

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THINKING For 06
    THINKING AT NIGHT

    Can’t keep love but its still within me
    The Dove birds sings and must be set free
    Poetry comes to my soul in the naked night
    When my eyes have no wings or have no sight
    I must love myself, do my self, heal myself and forgive myself
    To escape the death walking plank
    Some die without a heart and are left to stank
    When I die I want to melt like a mummified chocolate bar
    Into a famous cologne or scent
    Then sniff your nose and say: “There he went”
    My first poem of the year
    What should it wear
    A trunk of gold smeared in fear
    Or new tools shopped at Sears
    No tears this year
    Only a box of muscles and double dears
    Packaged and gifted wrapped into the cranium
    Unity an Atomic bomb of uranium
    The End/Amen

    With Love
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I bow
    This was hot
    I mean you layed this one down
    Melt like a mummified chocolate bar
    haha do your thang
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word....that was dope...
    i can smell it...lol

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely i can smell the depth of this piece
    welcome in da new year deep...............
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo poet flo on!!!!!!!!!:welldone: :blowkiss:
     
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